Silent cries

By Ashley

I scream out. 

In my own head. 

Wanting help. 

But not sure how to ask. 

I could just let it eat me up. 

And not say a thing. 

But. 

Where would that put me? 

Cracking 

Crumbling 

And falling 

Until I'm gone. 

What is there to do..? 

Reviews

[Horizons]

Nothing to do, just stay alone and think of others and compare yourself with them you'll find the truth onself, you'll get how better and how good you're in the world than others because you do realize on yourself what you do and it's a great thing you do. It's a piece you again made that can be apply on other's life too, me too think the same when i get feel alone and fee crying due to my bad stuffs but a voice come from the heart says don't take much stress, everything'll be ok with the time in the life. So, everything really be ok in everyone's life, there's only need to analyze onself first only.
Powerful realistic poem again. I felt it again right from the heart. It's a sentimental poem makes emotional.

[Kitten]

Thank you very much.

[MoriartyMesa]

Someone totally wiser than me, once said; Not matter how hard the winds blow, the mountain shall never bow




Be proud to be honest and open, there is a lot of under line themes and expression that reads of the writer, but you can create and own it, love it, and show it.

[Kitten]

Thank you for the advice.