Don't come to me

By Ashley

Don't come to me. 

For advice 

Or comfort. 

Don't come to me. 

To boost your esteem 

Or feed your ego. 

Because. 

I can't help. 

How can? 

When my own brain. 

Is so 

Broken 

Twisted 

And poisoned.

That I don't know where I am. 

Without a blade in my hand. 

So don't come to me. 

I'll just make it worse. 

I'll tant you...  

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

Crazy lot of emotion!! I read on your profile that if we wish to talk and not be judged, to visit a site link you provide right under it, but this poem says the total opposite of what your profiles allows for.... trust in that someone "you" might have our back and understand. I, totally, understand though. lol I've written about the craziest things one would imagine their nightmares coming to life, and I have not not indulged in MANY of them... Misspellings don't usually matter, but the last line had a word that stuck me to it, trying to figure out what it was. "tant" supposed to be "taint"? When you ask the question "How can?", would it look better to you to write, "How can I?" Nice job!! If you had a space above and below the poem, as well, it would make this poem stand out, too. : ) xox -Mark

[Kitten]

When I wrote this poem I was really upset. So there are bound to be a few mistakes but yes that is suppose to be taint and how can I? But. Thank yew. :)

[Weeping Willow]

This is pretty good, i been reading some of your work and your really talented I'm nothing compare to you. I also love writing poems about my feelings, but i dont think i could ever write poems that meant something to others and not just myself.
Anyway good read :)

[Kitten]

Thank yew.

[Bound In Red]

I agree with everyone else. You've helped me more then you give yourself credit for. i love you sissy.

[Graveyard Queen]

you have helped more people than you think, you aren't poisoned or tainted

[Rika]

That's not true, you have helped me,and I'm sure other people too and were also here for you *hugelzs*