His new life?

By Ashley

He opened his eyes. His head pounded and his throat burned. What had just happened? Where was he now? Is was dimly lit and smelled of death and dust. He looked around. But only could make out a few objects lining the walls and a barred up window in the ceiling, that let in hardly any light. He tried to sit up, but strapped to a table. What the hell? His head cleared and the events from just minutes before came rushing back. 

They were driving down the wet and slick road. It had been raining for three days straight. She hated driving at night. Let alone in the rain. But he insisted on them going out tonight. Her hand slipped into his as they sped down the long road. He smiled lightly. As she turned the corner, their car rammed right into a large object. She was knocked out into the dashboard. He was awake but his back and every other part of his body was killing him. "Damn." He said under his breath. He put his hand on the bleeding cut in the head and turned to look at her. Seeing her in the state she was. A rush of panic hit. He shook her and screamed her name. She finally came to,when two large dark figures approached the car. One of them shining a bright flash light right at them. He quickly got her behind him. "Who is that?" She asked. he shook his head. Right as their faces came into focus. The stronger one grabbed him by the collar and pulled him through the front of the car. "Yes. This is him." He said breathing horrible breath into his face and grinning. He struggled to be let go of. But the man just gripped his shirt harder. "If you are not going to come willingly. We are taking you by force. He screamed and tried hard to get free. She was screaming his name. And then he suddenly felt a strong force hit his side and a stabbing pain. S**t. A*****e. He knew what had just happened. And all he could do was wait for the numbness to start. He hoped they wouldn't hurt her. That she would call someone. And get home safe. He watched her trying to get out of the car as he was being carried away and his vision was fading. 

He was breathing hard. Trying to break free. Where had they taken him? What did they want with him? He heard a door open and the light that was let in. Was blinding. He flinched away. One of the two men that had taken him, walked in. 

"It's no use. Those things were made special. Just for you." He said chuckling. He spit right in the man's face. 

"Let me go you dick!" He yelled. The man wiped the spit out of his eye. 

"Shut up. You little brat. You are lucky the boss is making us wait. Or I'd rip that dirty tongue out of your mouth. Right now." He said getting right in his face. Yeah, same breath. What does this guy eat? 

"Now. You've got three hours. You know what you've done. And why you are here. So. I suggest. Giving the boss what she wants. Or suffering until you do." He said walking out. It was dark again. Tears started streaming down his face. What was he talking about? 'What I did?" He sighed and just hoped she was ok. He knew she was going crazy without. 

"Please my dear. Don't fret. I'll be home soon." He whispered as the after effects of the drug hit him and his head hit the hard metal as he passed out. 

Author's Note

Not really sure. If I'm ganna do more on this. But here it is. Just a small thing I had and idea for..

Reviews

[Lil Guppy]

If you don't continue this, I think I'll cry for week. ^_^

[Luna Kusan]

Please k-keep writing!!

[InsanityWriter]

Great job! :)

[♪Barklight♪]

Woah, cool! 100/100! ^_^

[Weeping Willow]

great read thanks

[escapingherself]

I like the moment that you've captured here. Those final lines really make the story tragic. Hopefully he gets a happy ending! The only thing I would suggest would be to let your sentences flow a little more. In some places short, simple sentences work very nicely, but in others they seem broken and awkward.

[Kitten]

Thank yew. And the reason for that is when I get a little stuck and not sure where to go next..