The Bus

The Bus

A Poem by Suavis_Umbra
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one of my first little stories about love at first sight and how I could have never aquire it.

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Everything... was just so slow, so calm and pure like a constant beat of life, drumming through me. I was looking, through the shallow piece of glass into... I honestly did not know what was in there or beyond that thin piece of glass but I did know that, something unknown which I couldn’t describe by words, words were to hollow and corrupted to try to explain this feeling.

 

Next to me there was this angel that seemed to almost be a sort of divine intervention. I looked at her and she turned her head towards me, facing her eyes towards mine; Diamond eyes, hair with a weak scent of lilies accompanied and a body which would by far exceed any woman alive. My eyes burnt into hers. Dazed, petrified were just a quarter of what I was feeling, every single sensation available came, one by one and then... a sudden symphony!

 

As she walks out of the bus, I turn my head towards the shallow glass and for the first and last time, see her and feeling this depression and loneliness which could’ve not been comprehended but I was. I didn’t speak to her, I was scared! But it is better the way it is now. She would’ve gone to he who loved her most and not an amateur like me! Still... Her existence and memory would’ve always stay in my mind as... something indescribable but only sensational

© 2011 Suavis_Umbra


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Suavis_Umbra
there might be some unusual punctuation.

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Aw. Sweet. I love sweet stories like this ^_^

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on September 3, 2011
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Tags: love, firstsight, aquire, choice, angel, beatoflife, rashbash, poem

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Suavis_Umbra

Terra, Dark Corner of the Earth, United Kingdom



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