在窗户边 (Beside the window)

wrote this poem a while back, originally in Chinese for extra credit

Original:

�'坐在�-户边

看这月亮爬天空的�'头�'

看这星星在�'海里玩儿

听那暖春风

带这�-�数花�"�

 

�-户边的桃�'现在在开花

那克�'是你的喜爱

�"一朵花在�'手里

�'不禁想起你

一直，永远想你

Translation:
I sit by the window,
Watching the moon climb night’s black hair
Watching the stars in the black sea, playing
Hearing that warm spring wind
Carrying countless flower petals
 
The peach tree beside the window is blooming
That tree is your favorite
Catching a petal in my hand
I can’t help but think of you
Always, forever thinking of you

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sarah]

realy sweet lovely...
XD

[An owl on the moon]

Your words are hushed and beautiful, like the night sky filled with stars... And your longing heart flows profoundly... I simply love your use of Chinese characters.. they are like poetry in and of themselves.. Amazing write...