Then the bubble burst

Two people viewing the same thing, both 14 words

 

Then the bubble burst

Then the bubble that reflected the world burst

 

PESSIMIST:

Then the flawless bubble,

Still swirling the multicolored reflections of a perfect world,

B u r s t

 

OPTIMIST:

Then the flawless bubble burst,

Raining kaleidoscopic drops of perfection

Towards the flowering earth

Author's Note

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Reviews

[smalltownsympathies]

Wow. interesting. I enjoyed the strange tone of this. It's not quite something I'd ever read before, but I'm glad I did!

[Norma M Sutton]

Just one. Would a pessimist even see something as being flawless?