Love in the ice

Love in the ice

A Poem by Aldora Sparrow
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made out of boredom. Ironically made in the summer...

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Looking into your eyes, are you still afraid to love?

Over the years, are you still scared to remember someone? I can feel your warmth so

Very close. Like ice, the embraced heart begins to thaw

Even if fate’s mischief pains your heart, a single ray of light shines

Into the rippling darkness. I know it’s

Not your fault those hands are freezing

Those scars borne from those childish days

How could you pretend not to see the other side of words?

Even the coldest of hearts can flow with scalding tears

If it was me, I’d make your heart warm once more

Could you let me embrace your hardened heart?

Even if it’s momentary, I’ll let you know my love

 

Love in the ice…

© 2010 Aldora Sparrow


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Waaa! Just like the DBSK song. Such and ingenious idea!
I really enjoyed this cuz it reminded me of when I wrote this one shot
for a contest entitled "Love in the Ice" haha, sorry about going sidetracked there.
Anyways...I really enjoyed is and it flowed nicely. I'm so glad I just happened to
come online today. I've really missed reading your work ^_^

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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another one of those amazing poems of yours. (: atill waiting for under th same sky chapters, send me a read request okay? love your works. lucky to come across with you on WC.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was a very beautiful poem. Very good. I liked it ^_^

Posted 14 Years Ago


Waaa! Just like the DBSK song. Such and ingenious idea!
I really enjoyed this cuz it reminded me of when I wrote this one shot
for a contest entitled "Love in the Ice" haha, sorry about going sidetracked there.
Anyways...I really enjoyed is and it flowed nicely. I'm so glad I just happened to
come online today. I've really missed reading your work ^_^

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I have been writing for longer than I can remember, but it was only during 7th grade did I start to write outside of class. I am still inexperienced and I love helpful comments. I love to write fa.. more..

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