Butterfly

Butterfly

A Poem by Aldora Sparrow
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Not the best, but I try. Hope you like it!

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I once caught a beautiful butterfly

Protecting, loving it then setting it free



When it didn’t return from the sky

I knew it wasn’t meant for me

© 2010 Aldora Sparrow


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Aldora Sparrow
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Ohmigod....I loved it.
This made me wanna cry..Such a short piece...And..I get that much delible emotion...Wow...Speachless!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simple but beautiful. The image in the middle especially gave me a good imagery and feeling to the poem. Such a short but beautiful piece, I love it :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


So beautiful.. the word image is magical... Your intimate write helps us look through your eyes at the beauty once held in your hand... and the release.. Wondrous write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


The first thing i noticed is the picture is very beautiful, and the poem is short and lovely to read, great message, things thats meant for us comes back to us no matter what and the ones thats not meant for us doesn't stay even when locked up...
lovely...

Posted 14 Years Ago


It is short and sweet. It is great:)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 9, 2010
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Aldora Sparrow
Aldora Sparrow

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I have been writing for longer than I can remember, but it was only during 7th grade did I start to write outside of class. I am still inexperienced and I love helpful comments. I love to write fa.. more..

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