Cold winter

Just a short haiku. Maybe I could write a story off of this... Anyway, enjoy! Thanks to Craig Forman for the suggestions!

I’ve always believed

That winter was always cold

Until I met you

 

Author's Note

Any suggestions?

Reviews

[cheeeeese]

I've always said that people can say so much with so little words, but this was really the perfect definition of what I meant. I mean perfect. This haiku was just really fantastic. Wonderful piece 100%

[Lucia]

Nope I like the title how it is...though I'm weird and probably would have put a question mark in it. haha, but I really like it. The first to lines are captivating and the last is like....well I can't explain the feeling. but I sighed and smiled almost without noticing. Don't know what that means lol but I enjoyed reading this. Great Work!

[SM Davis]

Perfect Haiku....and a very smooth transition from one line to the other. WELL DONE!!!

[James Paulin]

Early Thaw

[Leaner Pastures]

There is a very delicate duality in that last line. Is the winter warm in comparison or warmed by the presence of "you".

I think "Cold Winter" as a title sets the stage perfectly.

[An owl on the moon]

This is an absolutely perfect haiku! Such a tender, beautiful, warm message. A title? Hmmm... Maybe "Until" or "In Winter" or "Then I Met You." Just love it!