Cold winter

Just a short haiku. Maybe I could write a story off of this... Anyway, enjoy! Thanks to Craig Forman for the suggestions!

I’ve always believed

That winter was always cold

Until I met you

 

Author's Note

Any suggestions?

Reviews

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Nice. I liked it .

[Sush Krish]

when i saw the page, i thought it was something random ...
but when I read it, It was so beautiful!!
A few words can say so much
The last line is very memorable.

Good job, keep it up!!

[THE LOST ROSE]

Titles, "warmth", "Inside" "Spirit", "Mother Nature" okay i am reaching with those titles. I love this piece. Maybe a title should be "It Is"?

[azlamalo]

totally love it!

[Wicahpi]

O! That is "Ouch" lol
good luck in the contest.

[Glowheart]

Very cute Haiku. The title is great.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the Haiku Please contest.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Haiku from the heart. Congrats on your this great Haiku!

[Miss Coral]

Beautiful, tender, sweet.. perfect.

Maybe "Warm Winter"?
:)

[deeps]

A wonderful Haiku,
I like the title you have fits perfectly