Cold winter

Just a short haiku. Maybe I could write a story off of this... Anyway, enjoy! Thanks to Craig Forman for the suggestions!

I’ve always believed

That winter was always cold

Until I met you

 

Author's Note

Any suggestions?

Reviews

[Becky]

This is so sweet. I love it! :)

[light and ashes]

How we see the world and everyone in it is shaped by our perceptions, beautiful write.

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

I like the one it has or even "Until I met You" would be perfect. I wanted to tell you I loved this short poem. I love when something with so few words can pack one hell of a punch into the world. I also wanted to take a moment to personally congrats you on placing in the "Powerful Short Poetry Contest"

[dutch2lips]

this is so sweet, good poem

[Allen Smuckler]

I tried not to smile...But it is what it is....and I loved it..
Pretty much says it all, Aldora
Allen

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love this! Perfect little hakiu!

[Linear]

Winters can often last a life time, and a few words can melt a heart, this can be read in a few ways, like a diamond exposed to the light the reader may see many different facets, well done 7 points

[Fran Marie]

Very nicely penned~ I like it!

[Tate Morgan]

It is beautiful
Tate

[EmpressPoetess]

Love's warm glow?