Permanent

Just a little thing I wrote in my free time. Hope you like it. Special thanks to Jaclyn for suggesting the title

Your face is burned into my mind's eye

Your voice melted into my ear

Your touch branded onto my skin

Your scent seared inside my nose

Your taste scarred upon my tongue

Your past love still fused with my heart

 

 

 

See how hard I have to fight against myself to forget you?

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Daniel Olson]

I like it alot but i think it would be even better with some description, like say a line about what it feels like to have his/her voice melting in your ear.

[Lucia]

Such precise sensory words. Impressive! Hehe, just stumbled on this...though I'm glad I did.

[Dianah]

Great way of expressing these feelings...memories like tatoos are not easy to get rid off.

[Kira]

Forgetting won't come easy. I know, I know. (Though I never knew what he tasted like...huh...)

[Jaclyn]

When I think of a title... I basically make it the first word I think of after reading a poem if that helps you in the future :)
The word that came to me after this write was Permanent..
and by the way I enjoyed it good job