First Time..

Self Explanatory

This is a first time..

A first line..

A second line, has become the my third..

Now to the fourth, the feeling is absurd..

the more i think, the more the thoughts inside my brain begin to shrink..

and that sort of does stink...

Instead of writing with ink,i am stroking the keys to my first piece in writers cafe..

freeing for the first time ina while, and I didnt have to pay..

I kinda like this feeling, yes i think I do..

not sure i like this piece, the question is..Do you?

ladies and gentlemen please remember..

Its only my first time.

Thanks.

-DaRiiUs-sOuL

Author's Note

comment, let me know what you think, i plan to add some serious stuff soon.

Reviews

[['tatiz speis]]

Ok, this is hilarious. I love the whole play on the 'first time' situation, which people usually associate with other... intimate situations haha. But I really liked it. Give me more!

[Butterflymom]

This is a fun piece, and I enjoyed it! I'm curious to see more of your writings because I think you have a nice sense of humor!

[Maylea]

I really like that one. Especially the beginning. Haha very creative! The middle didn't flow as well but the beginning and end were strong. Awesome poem, hope to see more from you!