The Depths

Release me from the depths, for I am sinking,

This anchor chained to my heart wont budge,

Dragging me to the trench floor.

In the absence of air, I breathe.

Everything in me is dispersed within the water.

Contaminated ocean fluid harms whatever is engulfed in it.

Evacuate this sinking ship to save yourself !

Save your soul !

Resting along bottom trench,

The ship has reached the harbor.

Reviews

[DogDrawler]

Good start. Good job, maybe greater if you work on it a little more.