Groves of Remembrance

Groves of remembrance

Listen to wind
as it swiftly escapes
for a better fate
in a bitter dream

will we ever storm out?
unto joy and delight
fluttering in awe
as memories cast us aback

waiting...
in fallow shelters
that offer no warmth
nor restful sleep

hear the tune
of the weary past
resonating within
that dreams of escapism

the scheme of care and trust
to ever do us apart...




   

Reviews

[Dinoraptor101]

I actually sang this one... 0.0 no offense meant.. but you can do songs from your work... this is a 100% genius what are you doing in Jordan???

[thatbryngirl]

This was so beautiful. i reallyyy enjoyed reading this. it was so peaceful:) rich and deep, yet soft, breezy, and whispered to me. i love this! thanks for sharing.

[Seashell]

I could hear the gentle breeze gently blowing away all the sadness to another planet as I read this. If only eh ?
Very nicely put together.

Thanks for share

Babs xx

[Constance-Outspoken]

Often we seek the sad memories we hold dear rather than the blessed ones... why is this? I think it's because the blessed ones remind us of the saddest ones.
Wonderful work, you know...

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a beautiful flowing poem. I have felt like this a lot lately. The emotions are pour heart breakingly into this poem. sorrowful write.

[alesuriko]

Very nice. I really enjoyed this one. The imagery is beautiful and it feels like the words are flowing through you like a breeze or wind or words that you're remembering from the past... I'm not really sure what I mean at this point of lacking sleep but it's really well written.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such rich depth in your words, facing the past, feeling the present, wondering of the future... all in the sounds of the wind... its whispers resonating around us... Beautifully done.

[Bette]

i like this "Listen to wind
as it swiftly escapes
for a better fate
in a bitter dream"