Shapeless Facade

Shapeless Facade

In quantum time and trifling labor

Within the wake of chaos

Crumbling visions

Future’s tied down

And the apathy in reform

Force-fed by nothingness

 

We shelter in higher grounds

Behind subtle smiles we hide

Bracing individuality

 In this mono-existence

Striving for survival

Through this fallacy we made

Grief now virtual

In our enslaving shade

 

Set a stone in the haste of others

Caress the guilt and sin

Objectivity, is yet another face

To the coin

Forever revolving

   

Reviews

[Ahmad Alhour]

Sharmooo6 Abyaaaaaath bel Kondarah !!!!!
Walak you never seize to drop this message - which i can't tell about for political reasons, i guess :P - and sheklak mesh m9allay 3annabi :P
loooooooooool
This piece is - with no flirting - your master piece so far...
I want it in the band's pieces wala!!!

[Dinoraptor101]

I found myself in this poem... I want to try and sing your poems. do you have melodies written for this one yet??

[An owl on the moon]

You paint a vivid image of what is and what is merely a covering... True and lies... black and white... genuine and false... Where does the world begin and end? So well done!

[cest la vie]

First piece I have read of yours and most definitely will not be the last..
I can already tell you feel deep and think even deeper..
This piece just grabs us by the collar shouting"wake up! Don't you see what it's all about? This thing called life and how we live it"?

Good piece:-)

[Bette]

this was different. i like your word choice.

[Fallen Angel]

This was an intersting piece. good write