Spinal Tap -Part I- [ Lumbar Havoc ]

Lumbar Havoc

Unto the veiling past and lingering fragments
Shattered images cast a deathless shade
Upon a shimmering reflection
of a bygone debris, trembling in solitude

Relics yielding delusions
Puncturing sensibility
Of a once lived reality

The taste of belonging
Bitter now...
Wrecks and ruins
All that's left from
The rigid sense of promise
Battered concrete remnants
Earthly tombs...
Of all what was of meaning and motive

At hand, this pile of ashes
The crumbling misconception
Of a society, foreshadowing success

Reviews

[Ahmad Alhour]

OMG!!! This piece is very astonishing...
I liked the silent rhymes along with the vague yet meaningful flow of thought...
It seems you're preparing for something great to reveal :P ;)
Keep up the great work :)

[Jeannie Wilder]

pretty words

and this is an incredibly lame review

[Bette]

smooth and great word choice! well done.