Earth Dance

Earth Dance

A Poem by Darby Louise
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Quirky little poem about dancng with Earth :)

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If I could dance with the world,

Where would we go?

How would we dance?

What step would drift us to and fro?

To these questions, I do not know.

But due to the fact that earth is seventy-one percent water….

I know I’d end up soaked.

© 2012 Darby Louise


Author's Note

Darby Louise
If you began read this thinking it would be philosophical, hopefully the ending made you step back from philosophy and smile for a bit :) Don't take life so seriously. Be able to let your mind wander. Soak yourself in the wonders of the world.

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A great message in your poem and author's note. Thought provoking in such a few lines. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a wonderful write, cute and simple.
So nicely written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If you dance just right, you can dance right across the water. Fun write. Someone told me once I couldn't use questions in poetry, I disagree.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Quirky indeed...

A fan of philosophy...:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on March 3, 2012
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Tags: earth, dance, water, funny, humor, humour, laugh, cute, inspirational, people, think, thinking, question, travel, laughing

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Darby Louise
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I write stuff. Spontaneously. Then for hours. Writing's good for the soul, and so I keep myself healthy. more..

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