catholic secrets

it is a scary story with a wierd twist at the end but this is only the begining dont know whether to keep working on it or not.

“In the late 1800’s there was a catholic church. Cathedral Church I believe its called, anyway it has huge castle like with stained glass windows with a giant cross on the top. There was a pastor who went by the name of Father John and his right hand was Sister Candice. Father John and Sister Candice not only had a personal relationship but also some activities more sinful than fornication. Little boys started coming up missing from town and parents begin to get suspicious with the pastor. One day he was preaching and everyone heard a scream come from the basement. Turns out that father John had been taking the little boys and raping and killing them. When the parents found out they were outraged. Sister Candice would reel them but one day Father John tried to get one by himself and the parents caught him. They torched the building with him inside and not knowing that there was still four or five little boys in there with him. Sister Candice was on her way back from the grocery store when she seen what was going on. They say Sister Candice had left town also that she was pregnant.” Steve tells the story.

Steve was the typical jock in the group in was a varsity wrestler and went to state every year; varisty jacket, levis, blonde with a short cut. He was along with 4 other friends. Shelby which was his girlfriend she was the cheerleader “the popular” girl. There was mike the scholar he had gotten a offer to a medical school full ride, he was a casual dresser. his girlfriend but also the ex of Steve was Mary she was the perfect girlfriend her plan is to be a photographer she always carries a camera.Steve and Mike were very different but was close friends.. Then last there was the rebellion Tyler who smoked a lot of pot and often times skip class. His parents were loaded and he never really had to do anything for himself he figured he would just have his parents pay for his college.

The group of the friends heard that the church was haunted and that anyone who goes in there does not come back out. The myth was after 12:00 midnight all the little boys and father John would come out and walk the church, they say if you listen closely when the bell rings you can hear the scrams of the little boys.” You guys ready.” Steve asks the group. “ I don’t know man.” Mike replies. “Quit being a p***y.” Steve says.” I’m not being a p***y Steve we don’t if this myth is true or not.” Mike says defensively at Steve.” what ever dude I’m going in” Steve says as everyone starts to follow him to the church. ”Its okay bay nothing going to happen.” Mary says. Mary and Mike follow behind them.

When they get there the church doors has been boarded up Mike,Steve and Tyler rip the wood off the door and everyone goes inside. It is dark and they are moving cautiously down the rows of the seats in the sanctuary, there is spider webs all through out the church walls and ceilings.” Its 11:50 ten minutes before the action starts.” Steve say with eagerness. Tyler wonders starts to walk up to the stage and parodies preaching. He feels something behind him and he quickly turns around.”What was that.” Tyler quickly and with curiousity. “ Tyler your just high.” Shelby says with a slight chuckle. Everyone joins in agreement. They all left the sanctuary and went to the basement where they had heard Father John and the little boys died. The basement was burned badly and u could still smell the burned flesh of the bodies. “dude how come nobody ever tore this place down.” Mike says. “ the whole town is scared to come even close to the church yet alone try to destroy it.” Steve replies.

As Steve finishes his sentence the basement door slams shut.” What the f**k was that.” Shelby yells with fear. “it was the basement door, what time is it?” Steve says “ twelve o’clock dude.” Tyler replies.

Author's Note

this is the beggining of the story dont know if i want to turn it into a script or novel