Within, I'll Flow

searching for my inner strength.

I’ll flow, from the trance so fast as my thought trickles,
Walk with its pace, slightly forgetting the reality,
Swim in the ocean of my feelings, enter my nerve,
And then I’ll witness myself naked in front of me.

I’ll go and search what’s within my mortality,
Search for the being I haven’t seen yet in person,
Deep down, subtly, surely, I’ll find the unknown me,
And then I’ll witness myself naked in front of me.

I’ll see my body without the misjudge of its spectator,
Be the breath that surges in my loaded lungs,
Farther as I can, I’ll marvel and drive across my soul,
And I’ll spot in the weak me, the power my being restrains.
 

Author's Note

some kind of voyage to unknown to unleash the known.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"And then I’ll witness myself naked in front of me.
I’ll go and search what’s within my mortality,"
Your poetry is amazing. Made me desire to write tonight. I like the lines above. We must stand naken sometime and search who we are and what we need. Most of fear what we hide. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.

Coyote

[Damien Dsoul]

A voyage of Star Trek-like introspection. Salute!

[Pax Analog]

Very cool! Kind of a "Fantastic Voyage" of the inner being, as that film was a tour of the human body by miniaturized humans.

There's a sense of neuro-tracery, as well, almost anatomical.

The very essence of self-discovery, of finding more energy, power, insight, is always to investigate. The original historical Buddha discovered Enlightenment, by having exhausted the possibilities, and being ripe for that particular subjective scientific discovery. Thomas Edison discovered the electric light bulb, by getting it wrong 2000 times, but refusing to take failure for an answer. It's like we know when we are meant to discover a breakthrough, subjective or objective, spiritual or material, any kind at all.

By averring your voyage into the unknown to unleash the known, to find the flow, you do so.

Fab flux! ;-)

[reca-becca]

very nice poetry. but can you explain the meaning to me? i don't quite get it...