I Will Wait...

if I had to choose what to say

while i was on the brink of death

i would say "i love you" with my very last breath

In hopes you would remember me as the man

who loved you with all his heart

and that not even death could tear us apart

In hopes that you would remember when i was alive

as the funny,caring,and loving guy

I will be waiting for you to be by my side

To love you for eternity even after life

In my wait i will tell god all about you

And if anything how much i cared about you

I would tell him he has a beautiful dark angel coming his way

That loves me too as she would say

I will wait for you everyday

and pray i will see you again some day

If anything i hope you are happy

and not spend every day feeling crappy

 with a smile on your face,and tears of joy

while you hand your grandchild her new toy

"Live everyday to the fullest" as you used to say

"But remember to live it your own way"

I will be waiting for you to see me again

When you come i will hold you and say

"I love you" over and over again 

Reviews

[Cheyenne Naomi Crawford]

wow good job. sounds good to me. i used to write poetry all the time and stories until one day i just lost my touch.

[Kaylor Mason]

This is really cool . . . I like how it's told from the point of view of someone who's already crossed over, on the other side of Death's River. I don't know why, but that makes it much more profound, somehow.

[Treston Seek]

thanks man :)