I�m In Love With(A City Girl)

A city girl, who’s cute and kind of funny

But she’s type of girl who only takes

She can only care about her money

Yeah, she’s just the girl for me

 

She’s always in the center of attention

It always seems she doesn’t care

And I won’t forget to mention

For her, I’ll go anywhere

 

She has every shoe, in every color

She has every style, and I wonder

If she has ever thought of me

 

She’s so wonderful, so amazing

My love for her is blazing

But alas, our love is not meant to be

 

 

 

…in love with a city girl

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Mindless Mindset]

I LOVE IT!!! So bitter sweet with the dirty air of the greedy side of people mixed in (in a good way). Beautiful!

Zai is LovE

[Kloud_Nine]

I'll be the first to review this, thank you. :)

First of all I though it was pretty good, but it could have been better. Besides just a few grammaticl mistakes, which we all make so I'm not even going to go there I'll start by say that this:

"She has every shoe, in every color

She has every style, and I wonder

If she has ever thought of me"

is my faviorate stanza, and the stanza I believe you should build the entire poem around it. The structure of it, the simplicity that says everything and even the rhyming in it makes it attractive to the eyes and very pleasant to say over and over again, like a song.