Complaints about you

Finally letting out steam :D

I did what I had to,
Didn't say a word,
They sucked away the smell of life,
Don't have a family.
Don't have a grave,
Had tears, the earth drank them all.
Have dreams, still not allowed to chase them,
I left em in the dust.

There are complaints about you,
No one likes you,
Going too far, too fast,
There are complaints about you,
No one likes you,
Because you speak about something else,
Play different songs,
Have different priorities,

There are complaints about you
They all hate you,
You go too fast too far,
Sighs of dead gods from the depressing dark,
Can't hear the ancient call,

There are complaints about you,
No one likes you,
You play other songs,
Different music,
See between the lines,
Everyone's complaining about you,
Because they hate you,
Because they're p*****s.
Because you're free,
Because you still have dreams,
No tears to cry,
Going too far, too fast.

They ditched you,
Left for the depressing cries of dead gods,
No one likes a beast who can't be tamed,
There are complaints about you
The p*****s complain about you,
No one likes you,
Your music is different,
Your life's different,
You're still free,
Still chasing dreams,
Still unbound, still aware.

In a world of depressing sights,
Everyone's complaining about the last raging flame.

There are complaints about you.

Author's Note

If you got complaints about me...then fuck off :D I don't give a fuck. :D

Reviews

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

I just want you to know that there is nothing wrong with you. A lot of people love you. You mean a lot to people Danny. Sometimes we say hurtful things to one another. But we need to learn not to do that. we need to be able to get along and just be there for our siblings. I love you little bro and I really loved this poem. I felt the emotion. Great job!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thanks for the read and review.

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Your welcome. I enjoyed the read :)

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Cool. I like it. ^_^ You're good.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I'm not..anyway thanks for the read

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

At least better than me. Lol. You're welcome though. ^_^

[CiNtsaLis]

It sounded like rapping to me. *softly chuckling* although, the story or ("your story") is "DEEP" and actually sort of "DARK" I sensed solitude and judgement. Unfair paths and just disappointments. Though, all in all- you're stronger than that. *nodding head* I really like how you piece this write (together) it's kind of like your life in small words. *nodding head* (: full ratings; as usual.