Resurrected Night

Resurrected Night

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
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Satanic

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Satan will come for your soul,
In the resurrected night, he'll say
-Look at me.
I've brought your bill,
Time to pay.
You are nothin but a memory,
-Remember me.

Resurrected night.
From graves the voice of dead calls.
Resurrected night.
The end waits for you.

One day, when Satan comes for your soul,
Making pacts, all too late,
You'll see your true worth,
When he says
-Look at me.
I brought your bills,
Time for you to pay.
You became nothin but a memory
-Hehehehe, remember me.

Resurrected night.
From graves the voice of dead calls.
Resurrected night.
The end waits for you.
It's there to devour
your screams of terror,
As you're dragged to Hell.
Resurrected night.
Waits for your tears of blood,
Cries for mercy.

Hahahahaha. Welcome to Hell.


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


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Resurrected night.
From graves the voice of dead calls.
Resurrected night.
The end waits for you.
It's there, to devour
your screams of terror,
As you're dragged to Hell.
Resurrected night.
Waits for your tears of blood,
Cries for mercy.



The only thing out of this I would change is "It's there, to devour"
I'd try taking out the comma there.
Otherwise, it's a good piece of work

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

*runs after you*
wait up..
RJ

8 Years Ago

*giggles and pulls Danny into a dark closet with me and shuts the door with a keep out sign hanging .. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Wahahahaha! :D
off to be with my beautiful princess. ;)
out of 245 views...I get three comments, no corrections.
I'm either immeasurably talentless, or so good at it, that no one knows how to further improve. Which is it then..That's the question.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


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RJ
This is really good :) you iz very talented ^-^

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Thank you my princess
RJ

8 Years Ago

You're very welcome :*
The idea of being taken to hell by Satan my seem like a comical one to some, but in reality it is a terrifying concept. I know there are some out there who disregard the concept of a Hell or a Heaven, but I have one question, WHAT IF? That question is why I try to live a kind life, sometimes. A little rebellion never hurt anyone.

Anywho, my rant is over ;) Excellently written, Danny; you astound me, as always. Full Rates

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Well...When I've seen it for myself, for the first time, and felt the dread radiating from that ...c.. read more
Obscured by the Shadows

8 Years Ago

Good idea, no need to get into a religious debate on a public forum ;)
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

not necessarily religious.
but still...many people prefer religion over reality
All the terrible things we do may be forgiven, but if we go to hell, satan doesn't forget. Well done Danny.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Forgiven? Maybe.
Forgotten? Nope.
Thanks for the read.

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