Resurrected Night

Satanic

Satan will come for your soul,
In the resurrected night, he'll say
-Look at me.
I've brought your bill,
Time to pay.
You are nothin but a memory,
-Remember me.

Resurrected night.
From graves the voice of dead calls.
Resurrected night.
The end waits for you.

One day, when Satan comes for your soul,
Making pacts, all too late,
You'll see your true worth,
When he says
-Look at me.
I brought your bills,
Time for you to pay.
You became nothin but a memory
-Hehehehe, remember me.

Resurrected night.
From graves the voice of dead calls.
Resurrected night.
The end waits for you.
It's there to devour
your screams of terror,
As you're dragged to Hell.
Resurrected night.
Waits for your tears of blood,
Cries for mercy.

Hahahahaha. Welcome to Hell.

Author's Note

Nonfiction. :)

Reviews

[Hope Rose]

Resurrected night.
From graves the voice of dead calls.
Resurrected night.
The end waits for you.
It's there, to devour
your screams of terror,
As you're dragged to Hell.
Resurrected night.
Waits for your tears of blood,
Cries for mercy.



The only thing out of this I would change is "It's there, to devour"
I'd try taking out the comma there.
Otherwise, it's a good piece of work

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yay...a review. Thank you. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

correction applied.

[Hope Rose]

You're welcome lol you seem happy :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

yea....I don't get reviewed these days... idk why. probably cuz I'm talentless.

[Hope Rose]

YOU ARE NOT TALENTLESS
I just don't really get on or else I'd review your work

[Dani The Unreviewed]

nah. it's not because you don't review. because no one does, unless it's out of kindness. or mostly, probably pity.
so, I decided to stop writing and posting, until all my writes get read and reviewed. but that won't happen. .because I'm no good at it

[Hope Rose]

don't say that. i have all night to review your work

[Dani The Unreviewed]

no no ...don't waste your time. please. when you'll have time during the day, or you're not busy. it's not that important.

[Hope Rose]

you're funny. I don't sleep at night for some reason. so i generally do nothing.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

then try sleeping? lols.
stayin up all night ain't healthy.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

especially, when you're boring yourself with my worthless crap.

[Hope Rose]

I usually sleep during the day. Nighttime offers no help for me

[Hope Rose]

And your crap ain't worthless or boring

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yea...it is. it's probably the worst pile of words ever.

[Hope Rose]

Nope, that would be my work

[Dani The Unreviewed]

meh...did you compare em? I did.
you're good. well better than me that is.

[Hope Rose]

I can't do s**t. My work makes no sense

[Dani The Unreviewed]

then I'm even worse...
being more talentless than me. well that's impossible.

[Hope Rose]

no it's not

[Dani The Unreviewed]

'course it is.
I'm a lost case. lols

[Hope Rose]

no you aren't lol if you are, then im beyond lost

[Dani The Unreviewed]

ok

whatever.

[RJ]

*tackel hugs both* YOU ALL ARE AMAZING!!!!!! *runs away*

[Dani The Unreviewed]

*runs after you*
wait up..

[RJ]

*giggles and pulls Danny into a dark closet with me and shuts the door with a keep out sign hanging on it*

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Wahahahaha! :D
off to be with my beautiful princess. ;)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

out of 245 views...I get three comments, no corrections.
I'm either immeasurably talentless, or so good at it, that no one knows how to further improve. Which is it then..That's the question.

[RJ]

This is really good :) you iz very talented ^-^

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you my princess

[RJ]

You're very welcome :*

[Obscured by the Shadows]

The idea of being taken to hell by Satan my seem like a comical one to some, but in reality it is a terrifying concept. I know there are some out there who disregard the concept of a Hell or a Heaven, but I have one question, WHAT IF? That question is why I try to live a kind life, sometimes. A little rebellion never hurt anyone.

Anywho, my rant is over ;) Excellently written, Danny; you astound me, as always. Full Rates

[Dani The Unreviewed]

This was based on one of my extremely realistic nightmares. It's nothin terrifying to me.
Thanks for the read

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Of course, everyone is different. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well...When I've seen it for myself, for the first time, and felt the dread radiating from that ...creature. I nearly s**t my pants.
then, as I've seen it more and more. it became clear to me.
I'm either already a damned soul, or there's no such things as heaven and hell ...or more likely ...there's only the hells. not after death, but while we're alive..
after death. you're home free. well... let's leave it for now.

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Good idea, no need to get into a religious debate on a public forum ;)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

not necessarily religious.
but still...many people prefer religion over reality

[McBear]

All the terrible things we do may be forgiven, but if we go to hell, satan doesn't forget. Well done Danny.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Forgiven? Maybe.
Forgotten? Nope.
Thanks for the read.