Water,
Fire,
Blood and red desire,
I'm burning in the ancient fever.
Storms come and go,
Inside me the blood still rains supreme.
Pumping through my veins,
Exploding...Sweet white pain.
Reach up, higher,
Standing on the earth,
Dreaming of the sky,
There's no limit.
Hit me,
Doesn't hurt anyway.
Pull a crown of spikes,
Shoot me in the head,
Won't matter.
You'll cry out for the final strike,
A bloody demise.
Dip your blade in me quickly.
You know there's no mercy,
Cold steel rules down here.
The blood at work,
Demons at fault,
Instead of impure reflections, staring back in your face.
Always the hopes,
The fear of nonexistent perfection.
Hoping the heavens forgive,
Nonexistent grace,
Digging your own grave.
Hit me doesn't hurt anyway,
Kill me, there's no one who'd cry,
Prepare to die.
You know it all too well.
There's no mercy.
Crying for the final strike,
"Kill me already!"
Demands fall on deaf ears.
"Quickly dip your blade in me."
No reason for fear,
Burning in the ancient fever.
There's no power greater than the beast, who devoured the world.
Laws all break under the clenched teeth,
The fever burns,
Agony for some,
Just sweet pain in the conscious devils like me.
Burning in the ancient fever.
The blood at work,
Raging through my veins.
No reason to stop,
When it hurts so sweet,
And feels too damn good,
Everyone falls,
The beast can't be defeated
The world is doomed.
My unholy blood at work,
Burning in the ancient fever.
Blowing up red into my face
So sweet pain.
No limits,
Whatever Blood wants, Blood gets.
Weak Scriptures,
Scribbled nonsense,
Pathetic systems,
Weak humans,
Sold souls,
All mean nothing,
When the ancient fever comes for us all.
When my blood begins to boil.
Dreamers in a circle,
Crystal tears for their fallen heroes.
Don't look at me.
I'm not your public fool.
Hit me, doesn't matter no more.
Screams all around,
"Kill me before my blood begins to boil."
Afraid of your true selves,
Unaccepting of your sealed,fate.
Everyone's doomed,
Infinite nothing awaits after death.
The ancient fever rages on.
Stepping over dead bodies.
The blood at work.
Beating heart,
Pumping the fever through.
Blood and red desires,
Reaching higher than the sky...
Chaos on his rightful throne above order.
We're all doomed.
Hahahahaha!
Seems more like a metal lyrics with the way this comes about the read...by the tone...all this needs is a microphone and a band to set it off for all its purpose...I do see a need for editing in this work:
Water,
Fire,
Blood and red desire,
I'm burning in the ancient fever.
Storms come and go,
Inside me the blood still rains supreme.
Pumping through my veins,
Exploding...Sweet white pain.
Reach up, higher,
Standing on the earth,
Dreaming of the sky,
There's no limit.
Hit me,
Doesn't hurt anyway.
Pull a crown of spikes,
Shoot me in the head,
Won't matter.
You'll cry out for the final strike,
A bloody demise.
Dip your blade in me quickly.
You know there's no mercy,
Cold steel rules down here.
The blood at work,
Demons at fault,
Instead of impure reflections, staring back in your face.
Always the hopes,
The fear of nonexistent perfection.
Hoping the heavens forgive,
Nonexistent grace,
Digging your own grave.
Hit me doesn't hurt anyway,
Kill me, there's no one who'd cry,
Prepare to die.
You know it all too well.
There's no mercy.
Crying for the final strike,
"Kill me already!"
Demands fall on deaf ears.
"Quickly dip your blade in me."
No reason for fear,
Burning in the ancient fever.
There's no power greater than the beast, who devoured the world.
Laws all break under the clenched teeth,
The fever burns,
Agony for some,
Just sweet pain in the conscious devils like me.
Burning in the ancient fever.
The blood at work,
Raging through my veins.
No reason to stop,
When it hurts so sweet,
And feels too damn good,
Everyone falls,
The beast can't be defeated
The world is doomed.
My unholy blood at work,
Burning in the ancient fever.
Blowing up red into my face
So sweet pain.
No limits,
Whatever Blood wants, Blood gets.
Weak Scriptures,
Scribbled nonsense,
Pathetic systems,
Weak humans,
Sold souls,
All mean nothing,
When the ancient fever comes for us all.
When my blood begins to boil.
Dreamers in a circle,
Crystal tears for their fallen heroes.
Don't look at me.
I'm not your public fool.
Hit me, doesn't matter no more.
Screams all around,
"Kill me before my blood begins to boil."
Afraid of your true selves,
Unaccepting of your sealed,fate.
Everyone's doomed,
Infinite nothing awaits after death.
The ancient fever rages on.
Stepping over dead bodies.
The blood at work.
Beating heart,
Pumping the fever through.
Blood and red desires,
Reaching higher than the sky...
Chaos on his rightful throne above order.
We're all doomed.
Hahahahaha!
---
Water,
Fire,
Blood and red desire,
I'm burning in the ancient fever.
Storms come and go,
Inside me the blood still rains supreme.
Pumping through my veins,
Exploding...Sweet white pain.
Reach up, higher,
Standing on the earth,
Dreaming of the sky,
There's no limit.
Hit me,
Doesn't hurt anyway.
Pull a crown of spikes,
Shoot me in the head,
Won't matter.
You'll cry out for the final strike,
A bloody demise.
Dip your blade in me quickly.
You know there's no mercy,
Cold steel rules down here.
The blood at work,
Demons at fault,
Instead of impure reflections,
staring back in your face.
Always the hopes,
The fear of nonexistent perfection.
Hoping the heavens forgive,
Nonexistent grace,
Digging your own grave.
Hit me doesn't hurt anyway,
Kill me, there's no one who'd cry,
Prepare to die.
You know it all too well.
There's no mercy.
Crying for the final strike,
"Kill me already!"
Demands fall on deaf ears.
"Quickly dip your blade in me."
No reason for fear,
Burning in the ancient fever.
There's no power greater than the beast,
who devoured the world.
Laws all break under the clenched teeth,
The fever burns,
Agony for some,
Just sweet pain in the conscious devils like me.
Burning in the ancient fever.
The blood at work,
Raging through my veins.
No reason to stop,
When it hurts so sweet,
And feels too damn good,
Everyone falls,
The beast can't be defeated
The world is doomed.
My unholy blood at work,
Burning in the ancient fever.
Blowing up red into my face
So sweet pain.
No limits,
Whatever Blood wants, Blood gets.
Weak Scriptures,
Scribbled nonsense,
Pathetic systems,
Weak humans,
Sold souls,
All mean nothing,
When the ancient fever comes for us all.
When my blood begins to boil.
Dreamers in a circle,
Crystal tears for their fallen heroes.
Don't look at me.
I'm not your public fool.
Hit me, doesn't matter no more.
Screams all around,
"Kill me before my blood begins to boil."
Afraid of your true selves,
Not accepting of your sealed, fate.
Everyone's doomed,
Infinite nothing awaits after death.
The ancient fever rages on.
Stepping over dead bodies.
The blood at work.
Beating heart,
Pumping the fever through.
Blood and red desires,
Reaching higher than the sky...
Chaos on his rightful throne above order.
We're all doomed...
Hahahahaha!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
lol. thank you. :)
8 Years Ago
um. get me a singer, a drummer, a drum and a electric guitar, then I'll rework it, and make a song .. read moreum. get me a singer, a drummer, a drum and a electric guitar, then I'll rework it, and make a song :)
Thank you :)
(tho it's pretty evil...so idk if it makes it top ten. lol.)
8 Years Ago
yeah,that`s what is popular today it seems ! heavy metal
8 Years Ago
lol. it would be about thirty years back. maybe even ten years back. but hell! my music is stuck in .. read morelol. it would be about thirty years back. maybe even ten years back. but hell! my music is stuck in the eighties. :)
8 Years Ago
well i love the 70`s and 80`s music danny and i read your page about reviews
and i see you de.. read morewell i love the 70`s and 80`s music danny and i read your page about reviews
and i see you deleted a lot of your friends, it comes and go`s
yes. I deleted a lot of "ghosts " who keep sending rrs, and expecting you to review their stuff, but.. read moreyes. I deleted a lot of "ghosts " who keep sending rrs, and expecting you to review their stuff, but they wouldn't review yours. how's that okay? eh. anyway..lot of em even ignored messages, given reviews, comments...so there was absolutely no point of having a 8 page friends list, full of ghosts.
8 Years Ago
i get the same thing every day,i never send out rr`s got to run see you later
another ghost l.. read morei get the same thing every day,i never send out rr`s got to run see you later
another ghost lol
You have always had a way with words, brother. I feel the tense terror as I read more and more. It is a very amazing feeling. These first lines really caught my attention urging me to read more
"Water,
Fire,
Blood and red desire,
I'm burning in the ancient fever.
Storms come and go,
Inside me the blood still rains supreme. "
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
*whispers* that feeling is when the devil inside feels the chains loosening...
8 Years Ago
thanks for reading.
8 Years Ago
Anytime dude. Be sure to message me or whatever the f**k if you want me to read.
8 Years Ago
uh yea... I forgot. I've connected my fbook account to this one. (and I'm wondering who else is miss.. read moreuh yea... I forgot. I've connected my fbook account to this one. (and I'm wondering who else is missing from my friends list.) lol.
the last time I did it, the top ten on the list got mixed up, and two people were removed ..lol
and if you wanna read, you read. I'm done sending requests...and taking them as well.
8 Years Ago
I understand your pain. I end up just writing for my own goodness.
8 Years Ago
eh ...no pain
..only it became a waste of time.
.since I did read, but didn't get read.. read moreeh ...no pain
..only it became a waste of time.
.since I did read, but didn't get read, but I was still on here. lol
Very good; definitely chaotic but it does represent the violent (evil) side of humanity as a whole. And I must agree with Glen; with some loud sick beats and a singer who can scream, this could definitely be turned into metal.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
like I've said..
get me a guitar, find a drummer and a singer, and we'll make a song. :)
Uh well.... I like it... It's just kinda maybe a little violent. But it's really good ^_^
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Yes, well I reflected human impurity, onto what society considers a "good person ". and my own chaot.. read moreYes, well I reflected human impurity, onto what society considers a "good person ". and my own chaotic thoughts... lol. thank you babe ♥
8 Years Ago
What society thinks doesn't matter. I mean they probably thik we wont last because of the long dis.
Seems more like a metal lyrics with the way this comes about the read...by the tone...all this needs is a microphone and a band to set it off for all its purpose...I do see a need for editing in this work:
Water,
Fire,
Blood and red desire,
I'm burning in the ancient fever.
Storms come and go,
Inside me the blood still rains supreme.
Pumping through my veins,
Exploding...Sweet white pain.
Reach up, higher,
Standing on the earth,
Dreaming of the sky,
There's no limit.
Hit me,
Doesn't hurt anyway.
Pull a crown of spikes,
Shoot me in the head,
Won't matter.
You'll cry out for the final strike,
A bloody demise.
Dip your blade in me quickly.
You know there's no mercy,
Cold steel rules down here.
The blood at work,
Demons at fault,
Instead of impure reflections, staring back in your face.
Always the hopes,
The fear of nonexistent perfection.
Hoping the heavens forgive,
Nonexistent grace,
Digging your own grave.
Hit me doesn't hurt anyway,
Kill me, there's no one who'd cry,
Prepare to die.
You know it all too well.
There's no mercy.
Crying for the final strike,
"Kill me already!"
Demands fall on deaf ears.
"Quickly dip your blade in me."
No reason for fear,
Burning in the ancient fever.
There's no power greater than the beast, who devoured the world.
Laws all break under the clenched teeth,
The fever burns,
Agony for some,
Just sweet pain in the conscious devils like me.
Burning in the ancient fever.
The blood at work,
Raging through my veins.
No reason to stop,
When it hurts so sweet,
And feels too damn good,
Everyone falls,
The beast can't be defeated
The world is doomed.
My unholy blood at work,
Burning in the ancient fever.
Blowing up red into my face
So sweet pain.
No limits,
Whatever Blood wants, Blood gets.
Weak Scriptures,
Scribbled nonsense,
Pathetic systems,
Weak humans,
Sold souls,
All mean nothing,
When the ancient fever comes for us all.
When my blood begins to boil.
Dreamers in a circle,
Crystal tears for their fallen heroes.
Don't look at me.
I'm not your public fool.
Hit me, doesn't matter no more.
Screams all around,
"Kill me before my blood begins to boil."
Afraid of your true selves,
Unaccepting of your sealed,fate.
Everyone's doomed,
Infinite nothing awaits after death.
The ancient fever rages on.
Stepping over dead bodies.
The blood at work.
Beating heart,
Pumping the fever through.
Blood and red desires,
Reaching higher than the sky...
Chaos on his rightful throne above order.
We're all doomed.
Hahahahaha!
---
Water,
Fire,
Blood and red desire,
I'm burning in the ancient fever.
Storms come and go,
Inside me the blood still rains supreme.
Pumping through my veins,
Exploding...Sweet white pain.
Reach up, higher,
Standing on the earth,
Dreaming of the sky,
There's no limit.
Hit me,
Doesn't hurt anyway.
Pull a crown of spikes,
Shoot me in the head,
Won't matter.
You'll cry out for the final strike,
A bloody demise.
Dip your blade in me quickly.
You know there's no mercy,
Cold steel rules down here.
The blood at work,
Demons at fault,
Instead of impure reflections,
staring back in your face.
Always the hopes,
The fear of nonexistent perfection.
Hoping the heavens forgive,
Nonexistent grace,
Digging your own grave.
Hit me doesn't hurt anyway,
Kill me, there's no one who'd cry,
Prepare to die.
You know it all too well.
There's no mercy.
Crying for the final strike,
"Kill me already!"
Demands fall on deaf ears.
"Quickly dip your blade in me."
No reason for fear,
Burning in the ancient fever.
There's no power greater than the beast,
who devoured the world.
Laws all break under the clenched teeth,
The fever burns,
Agony for some,
Just sweet pain in the conscious devils like me.
Burning in the ancient fever.
The blood at work,
Raging through my veins.
No reason to stop,
When it hurts so sweet,
And feels too damn good,
Everyone falls,
The beast can't be defeated
The world is doomed.
My unholy blood at work,
Burning in the ancient fever.
Blowing up red into my face
So sweet pain.
No limits,
Whatever Blood wants, Blood gets.
Weak Scriptures,
Scribbled nonsense,
Pathetic systems,
Weak humans,
Sold souls,
All mean nothing,
When the ancient fever comes for us all.
When my blood begins to boil.
Dreamers in a circle,
Crystal tears for their fallen heroes.
Don't look at me.
I'm not your public fool.
Hit me, doesn't matter no more.
Screams all around,
"Kill me before my blood begins to boil."
Afraid of your true selves,
Not accepting of your sealed, fate.
Everyone's doomed,
Infinite nothing awaits after death.
The ancient fever rages on.
Stepping over dead bodies.
The blood at work.
Beating heart,
Pumping the fever through.
Blood and red desires,
Reaching higher than the sky...
Chaos on his rightful throne above order.
We're all doomed...
Hahahahaha!
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
lol. thank you. :)
8 Years Ago
um. get me a singer, a drummer, a drum and a electric guitar, then I'll rework it, and make a song .. read moreum. get me a singer, a drummer, a drum and a electric guitar, then I'll rework it, and make a song :)
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