Carve It On My Gravestone

Carve It On My Gravestone

A Story by Dani The Unreviewed
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CITOMG!

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I was born,
Like anyone else,
There's no boundaries to me.

There's nothing more important,
There's nothing, no one more deserving, Rock 'n roll.

I intoxicated myself with it,
Heavy metal raged from my instruments,
Wiped off entire worlds,
Burning down everything,
I know who's my GOD,
I know, it's my destiny.

Rock 'n roll,
That's how I cried out as a newborn,
Rock 'n roll,
I've repeated instead of the lecture,
Rock 'n roll,
Let it be my last grace,
Rock 'n roll,
That's what I want on my grave,
Rock 'n roll,
Let it be carved instead of my name.
Hahahahaha.

I'm speeding on my bike,
I leave the hurt behind,
No ones telling me, where I set my foot,
There's no law, other than
Rock 'n roll!

Rock 'n roll,
That's how I cried out as a newborn,
Rock 'n roll,
I've repeated instead of the lecture,
Rock 'n roll,
Let it be my last grace,
Rock 'n roll,
That's what I want on my grave,
Rock 'n roll,
Let it be carved instead of my name.
Hahahahaha.

© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


Author's Note

Dani The Unreviewed
Carve it on my gravestone instead of my name: "Rock 'n roll "

here my kickass band, with a song titled the same. listen while reading. :D


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A fun read, very entertaining, I can see it being a good song.
Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Danny, You know that I too worship at The Church of Rock 'n Roll, never missing a service. 8^) This piece must have been a lot of fun to write. There is a show on the TV channel VH1 Classic called "That Metal Show" that I watch religiously. It's mostly older metal stars but they have some of the most iconic figures in metal on all the time. A GREAT show. I don't know if that channel is available to you over there but if it is you need to check the show out.
Great write, buddy. take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Hehehehe :D what do you think, how did I select my American favorites? lol. I'm not always able to w.. read more
Hmm. I liked this one, Danny. It really shows how this person was influenced by rock and roll and how much they enjoy it. I enjoy your poems because they constantly explain in a good way about the feelings and actions.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Enjoying it, is a weak word in my case. it's a way for life. without it, there's nothing.
*softly chuckling* Not trying to be a pervert but.. The singer has a really nice body.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

completely in a trance from the music :))))
CiNtsaLis

8 Years Ago

*click click* I'm on to it (:
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

hehehehe :D it's almost 3 am, jus stopped listening to it

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