A poem

Take a look, though you won't have a clue about what you'll read.

Take a note, in your mind...
Everything here is like outside,
But still it's different.
Darkness, is one thing...
If you're afraid of the dark,
Then you're a p***y,
But if you're afraid of what dwells in it,
You're smart.

Look around, see an apocalypse,
A blood red, final eclipse,
It might end now,
Or tomorrow,
No one knows.
When it does, it's gonna be loud.
Aint no reason to be proud.
Just a quick note,
On a wall full of them.

Which one you read,
Doesn't matter,
There's tons more of it,
That you can't understand,
Doesn't matter how many times you read.
The code unlocks the gates of Hell,
So don't try to decipher.
There's one way in,
And no way out.

Pain is everyday, every second,
Everything, and nothing.
You've seen pain,
But not like this,
You've peeked into Hell,
Maybe once or twice,
But you didn't take a long walk,
From the front door,
To the back.
It wont open,
It better not.

You don't know,
You can't know...
No.
You don't know,
What's it like,
When sin burns,
And it hurts,
When it makes you hungry for more,
When it kills the last life in you.
Don't worry,
You didn't miss much.

What's been brought up,
By millions of years,
Burns down in seconds,
Over and over again.
It's always freezing cold,
While you walk in the burning world,
Some melt, others freeze...
Your time to bleed.

What you've seen outside, that's inside,
What's inside, that's outside.
Up goes down,
Down goes up,
Wrap your head around it,
Before you loose it.

It makes perfect sense,
Yet no one can understand,
Why they're trapped in there,
When they're only half way to the entrance.
Hehehehe, baby when you get here,
Then you'll see....
What that word, you use everyday,
Really means.

The gods, and such will not save you,
There's no hope down here,
When you get under the box,
To collect the treat,
It shuts down,
If it fits, it ships, mate.
Even if god sheds tears of blood,
There's nothing to save you.
Now you see the doorstep of my world.

Come on in,
Or not.
Enter if you're willing to loose your soul,
In the beautiful suffering,
Of sins flames.
The end results are the same,
Whatever you do.
The choice here, is not yours,
Since long.
If you come by free will,
Or get dragged,
The relentless, endless, beauty of pain
Awaits you with open arms.
There's always room for one more.

The everydays are always the same,
Yet still something you didn't see yet.
The best thing though,
When you kill yourself,
You get dragged back here.
In your dead body,
The heart begins it's mechanic ticking..
You're alive once again,
Welcome back.
Pain missed you, and your suffering.
After a while, it wont hurt so bad,
In fact, it becomes addicting...
When you feel that moment of clarity,
Sit down, and continue learning.
After you see the beauty of pain,
The scenes change...
You'll be taken to the other room,
Next class, begins soon,
And ends when eternity comes to a stop.
You'll get used to it...
Eternity is just a second, but a moment lasts forever.
When you think you're insane already,
Just remember, crazy folks don't know if they're crazy.

Beautiful isn't it?
It's the perfect sense, behind the scenes of perfect nonsense.
Until you've seen it, like I did,
You don't know a thing,
No matter anything...
There's only a very few people,
Who really know...
And not one of them is reading this.

Author's Note

When .. Whatever.
You don't get it. trust me. no matter how many times you read ... it takes to see it for yourself...

Reviews

[zaisham9393]

Okay first thing bro if you read my work there won't be any doubt that I don't get it so trust me I do.I have done every stupid thing I can to just run away from the pain and maybe at this point I learned to embrace it in a way, and basically that is what got me into this soppy poetry Lol.A year ago I wasn't even a fan of poetry, but now I try to write and it has helped me.I thing at the end you need an outlet to express your emotions and in a healthy way and just embrace life .It takes time and maybe it does get better and it will.You will get through this all you need is to hold on, try to ignore the haters and just stay strong!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

that's a fraction of the infinite picture.. thanks for reading.

[zaisham9393]

You're welcome :).

[Celie Rose]

Danny your poem is deep. Real talk. Powerful expression of never-ending pain. You right..if you have not gone through it...you don't know. "Eternity is just a second, but a moment lasts forever." The pain, the suffering, the grief, the heartache, the hopelessness...Well written. Stay strong and Keep up the good work dear friend.

[annalysiar]

The things you think you see
whispering ghosts that haunt your sleep
take my hand and stow the darkness you weep.
understanding, a lonesome feather
once graced upon lighter weather
nightmarish nonsense you say,
reality Is just another day,
Try and stand by me
through this haunted reality
by memories past
let it be a future you dream.
hear the darkest voices
from this wicked verse
madness, but nightmares curse
non understanding you deem
non accepting of the streets you've seen
reality's light come to those who seek it most
tell me what you think of my nonsense flow.

but on the real your story is empathetic and gripping. Its raw and in that its amazing

[Dani The Unreviewed]

and still the point stays hidden. thanks for the read.

[annalysiar]

Oh I got your point Danny and mine is exactly the same just in a different format.
but you're welcome.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

like I've said....only a few know. and none read it yet.

[annalysiar]

I read it. And I understand more than you think.
sometimes, friend of mine your better statement instead of "you don't know"
should be "how do you know"
anyone can look at words, few cam grasp their meaning. And fewer still cam truly understand.
this goes both ways. To the writer and the reader.
I'm not someone to be judged. Or to give poems lightly Danny.
nor am I someone who will be categorized. Noone Will ever stuff me into a box again.
Now, accept my gift and hear my words. Or don't.
that choice is yours.
I like this for a reason.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I've said what i had to. I'm a back to sleep...while i can.

[dan]

Danny, I'm sorry but I have several mental health disorders that prevent me from reading or understanding long stories or chapters. I lose focus and concentration quickly, ruining comprehension. I'm sorry that I cannot review this piece. take care...dan

[Dani The Unreviewed]

it's all okay, I'll keep that in mind. anyways, thank you :)

[wordman]

sounds like life in the fast lane,and you laid it out well !

[Dani The Unreviewed]

another pixel of the picture. thank you.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Dark and haunting..
With each stanza, its like we are going deeper into Inferno!
Well it reminded me of Dante's famous painting, depicting the phases of hell!

Eerie and emotive!
Outstanding work! One of your best that I have read here!
You have outdone your self my dear! So proud! *_*

[Dani The Unreviewed]

lols. thank you!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are Welcome!

[McBear]

I feel a sense of depression in this. Not literal depression but the fact that if you have been through depression, you will understand. The dark is not scary; it is the things that hide inside the dark.

Well done buddy. I really liked it :D

[Dani The Unreviewed]

another fraction of the very big picture. depression is only the darkness, and the unknown noises deep inside of it...thanks for reading.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

And yea....you don't know...that's only a truth i mentioned, so no one starts feeling special, thinking they do, and then start flooding me with "advice "
anyway, don't feel offended.