Nutheads

Nutheads

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
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Just for those who wanted me to change. and they failed :p Hahahahaha

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Why?
Why would I be different?
Tell me.
I'm like I am,
I don't care what they say about me.
That's who I am.
I wont change,
No pacts,
I'm always at war with the world,
And I wont change.

Another Nuthead I refuse to be,
There's enough of them!
Another Nuthead I refuse to be,
There's enough of them!

What?
What will be with me, if I wouldn't care, what future awaits me,
What would happen, if I didn't care?

Another Nuthead I refuse to be,
There's enough of them!
Another Nuthead I refuse to be,
There's enough of them!

I don't believe the lies,
No matter how many do,
I don't believe in the religious s**t,
I wont change,
I'm always at war with the world.
Tell me, why would I change?
Why would I care what others say about me?
That's who I am,
I don't care what others say,
And I wont change,
No deal!

All I have to say about that Is No!
And again, No!

Another Nuthead I refuse to be,
There's enough of them!
Another Nuthead I refuse to be,
There's enough of them!
Another Nuthead I refuse to be,
There's enough of them!

There's EEENNNOOOUUUGGGH!
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On Hungarian :



Mért, mond mért legyek más? Ilyen vagyok és nem érdekel, Hogy mit mondanak rám, ilyen vagyok Nem, én nem változom, én nem alkuszom. A világgal állandó harcban vagyok, Nem alkuszom Tökfej nem leszek, Van bel'le elég. Tökfej nem leszek, van bel'le elég. Héj, mondd, mi lesz velem? ha mindegy nekem, ha nem érdekel, hogy milyen szerep vár, mi lesz velem? Nem és még egyszer nem, Annyit mondok nem! Kimondatlanul is érezned kell, Érezned kell! Tökfej nem leszek, Van bel'le elég. Tökfej nem leszek, van bel'le elég. Tökfej nem leszek, Van bel'le elég. Tök fej nem leszek, van bel'le elég.


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Danny, For those who dare to be different, this is their anthem. For instance, in school (million years ago) I used to stand with my back to my locker and bang my head repeatedly. When asked why I'd say, "'Cause it feels so good when I stop." The theme is good, a great big 'f**k you' to the 'normal' insisters, but I think you should use a little less repetitiveness. Repeating lines or verses can be effective, but one should guard against overdoing it. Other than that, great piece of writing. take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

thank you very much



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I like the thoughts and the message Danny. There's no reason to change for anyone. We have to be happy with ourselves... without that we have nothing. I wrote lyrics for a song a while back with a similar message... lists everything anyone would think is wrong with me and the chorus was kind of like all these things are what have made me who I am. Can't change it, can't be perfect. All we can do is be who we are :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

jus be authentic, the rest will come along. :)
Hello Danny I really like your poem. Well expressed. Your words are strong, fearless, emotional...I get a sense of confidence and pride in this writing. Yes, indeed my dear friend, "Another Nuthead I refuse to be, There's enough of them!" Continue being you, no matter what! Keep up the good work. Stay strong..I miss you and guess what?

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is raw. And true. One cannot turn a cart sideways. Very nicely done

Posted 8 Years Ago


You are brave Danny bro. You always paint your emotions without showing the fear of doing so. As your brother, you know I always encourage you to be yourself. I learn to enjoy the person you are :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

even though I'm jus a pain in the a*s sometimes...lols.(i know lols...you're not the one stuck with .. read more
McBear

8 Years Ago

I don't think you're a pain in the a*s, lmao. I think you are actually a really fun, great guy.
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

lols ok...if you say so. thanks :)
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Danny, For those who dare to be different, this is their anthem. For instance, in school (million years ago) I used to stand with my back to my locker and bang my head repeatedly. When asked why I'd say, "'Cause it feels so good when I stop." The theme is good, a great big 'f**k you' to the 'normal' insisters, but I think you should use a little less repetitiveness. Repeating lines or verses can be effective, but one should guard against overdoing it. Other than that, great piece of writing. take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

thank you very much
very interesting, talks alot. this is amazing, by the way

Posted 8 Years Ago


Interesting, this speaks a lot. You are brave to have put your emotions on to here. You should put the Hungarian version right under it- I think it'd be pretty. *smiles* Also, I'm sure- it speaks differently. (:

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CiNtsaLis

8 Years Ago

*burst out laughing* I give you props- my boy. (:
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Hahahahaha!! :D
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

you're so... witty :) lols i like that. :)
Incase English wasn't enough, here it is on Hungarian :


Mért, mond mért legyek más? Ilyen vagyok és nem érdekel, Hogy mit mondanak rám, ilyen vagyok Nem, én nem változom, én nem alkuszom. A világgal állandó harcban vagyok, Nem alkuszom Tökfej nem leszek, Van belőle elég. Tökfej nem leszek, van belőle elég. Héj, mondd, mi lesz velem? ha mindegy nekem, ha nem érdekel, hogy milyen szerep vár, mi lesz velem? Nem és még egyszer nem, Annyit mondok nem! Kimondatlanul is érezned kell, Érezned kell! Tökfej nem leszek, Van belőle elég. Tökfej nem leszek, van belőle elég. Tökfej nem leszek, Van belőle elég. Tök fej nem leszek, van belőle elég.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 8 Years Ago



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