I'll Be Here; Written for close friends

I'll Be Here; Written for close friends

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
"

When you're in that dark hole...Remember, I'm here for you

"

Too much mumbling makes you angry,
You crave for silence,
Nobody's son stares at you,
Ignoring, saying "it's nobody".

Can't take the pressure,
The weight...
Standing, gasping for air,
The bridge collapsing before you,
Falling into the depths...
Where's the old spark?
You can't fly anymore.

The eyes of your soul ache
For a cure, some love.
When you're on your knees,
No strength to get up....

I'll be here!
Reach out your two arms,
I'll be here!
Tell me what's wrong?
I'll believe you,
I'll be here!
If I can, I'll protect you.
I'll be here!
Don't say a word, I understand you.

Bloody

razors in your hands,
Empty bottles in the corners, its all
Cheap comfort,
Self pity...

I'll be here!
Reach out your two arms,
I'll be here!
Tell me what's wrong?
I'll believe you,
I'll be here!
If I can, I'll protect you.
I'll be here!
Don't say a word, I understand you.

Shadows cover you...
Something cutting deep...
The silence is scary...
You ache for sounds,
Heavenly signs, visions don't come this way.
The road aahead is a swamp,
Too many snakes on the way.
The ghouls closing in....
It's time to move.
When there's no one to help you
through,
The world grows scary,
No one on your side...

I'll be here!
Reach your two arms,
Tell me what's wrong,
I'll believe you.
I'll be here, and listen.
I'll be here, and protect you if I can.
I'll be here.
Not a word, I know.

In front of you stands a bright future,
Don't look back,
Just keep heading straight ahead
There's enough light,
Just keep going forward!

And I'll be here.






© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


Author's Note

Dani The Unreviewed
The song inspired this.
This was written mainly for my friend, Deadsoul. I hope she enjoyed. :)
And second, it's written for any and everyone who's struggling in the dark.


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omg!!! Danny!!
This is so beautiful. The meaning the words have for you is so deep. I love it. Thank you so much dude. I can't stop smiling now. I feel so happy, like REAL happiness. Thank you so much for being there for me through my dark moments. You don't understand how thankful i am for this friendship. I am so happy i got to know you. Speaking with you makes me so happy. AHHH!
This is so sweet of you. I wish i could i hug you right now. I am so happy right now. i feel so loved and cared for. I can't even think of what to say to thank you for this. THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

: )
DeadSoulx_x

8 Years Ago

meep meep.
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

hahaha hahaha that's so cute :D



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I really enjoyed your poem Danny. Poem is very touching and deep. Very expressive and emotional. Love this part, "If I can, I'll protect you. I'll be here! Don't say a word, I understand you." Just keep going forward! Danny I wish I could understand the words to the video. Would love to feel the full impact. Well written. Keep up the good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Hehehe... If you understand the poem, you know the song too.
thanks.
Celie Rose

8 Years Ago

I understand...thanks
I love their hair... O.O
But more importantly, your poem. It's sweet you'd do that for her!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

lol. thank you :)
Crimson Apples

8 Years Ago

No problem.
I loved the poem Danny. And giving the font different certainly did give a different feel too.
You have aptly described that feeling of helplessness and fear when you are in the dark. A beautiful and heart warming poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

thank you bro :)
been at all those places, so decided to write for others. :-)
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omg!!! Danny!!
This is so beautiful. The meaning the words have for you is so deep. I love it. Thank you so much dude. I can't stop smiling now. I feel so happy, like REAL happiness. Thank you so much for being there for me through my dark moments. You don't understand how thankful i am for this friendship. I am so happy i got to know you. Speaking with you makes me so happy. AHHH!
This is so sweet of you. I wish i could i hug you right now. I am so happy right now. i feel so loved and cared for. I can't even think of what to say to thank you for this. THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

: )
DeadSoulx_x

8 Years Ago

meep meep.
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

hahaha hahaha that's so cute :D
I don't know what to say.this is amazing danny :) .Thank You so much for this .

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

just listen to song while you read :)
thanks :)

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