Just because!

I admit every word,
Spoken and left unsaid,
Did what many others,
Wouldn't dare,
Weird relationship it is,
The same song keeps us together,
His mine, and mine his.
Pushes me down,
And stirs my passion up.
With all my heart,
In every sleepless dawn,
We play our games,
'Cause its good,
Why?
Just because!

I always love it,
But I hate when it hurts,
No need for big words,
Spoken, or left unsaid.
I do, what others don't even dare to dream of.
In every sleepless dawn,
We play our games,
It's good!
Why?
Just because!

Hard as steel, it's wrenching my soul,
Puts flames in my dying heart.
A blessed curse,
Bringing us priceless moments,
Making great dreams,
And giving the world a reason to hate us.

I always love it,
But I hate when it hurts,
It's good.
Why?
Just because!
I admit every word,
Said, and left unspoken.

Author's Note

This means exactly what it means.

Reviews

[Usman Muhammad]

Well done friend!
The flow of emotions in this poem is beautiful.
But at the same time the main theme of the poem is heart rending and speaks a lot of itself.
Bravo! my friend please keep writing

[Shannon]

What a poinient way to describe any painful relationship that feeds some part of us. The end particularly universal, but, funnily enough, rarely expressed:
I admit every word,
Said, and left unspoken.
One word clarification :is it steering or stirring up passion?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

oops...typo. lol
thanks for the read.

[Shannon]

Since my reviews tend to be full of typos, who am I to judge? Just thought you might like a heads up!

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

Man, i love this one. Why? Just because! ^_^ Also really good. Lol.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

if only it was. thanks for the read tho

[SuMM3rGiRl777]

^_^ You welcome.

[Celie Rose]

Another beautiful piece. "I admit every word, Said, and left unspoken." Love..it is what it is, just because. Such expression and emotion. Nicely written. Keep writing!

[Davy]

Just you - just nice - it means what it means to the reader too.... (y)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

nah...it means exactly what it means. Thank you.

[Inject Positivity]

Wow!!!! What a poetry, its so beautiful, i think the simple words you have used to present your feelings here is quite remarkable mate....Im sorry for my late review buddy.....

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Never late. :) thank you.

[A writer]

Had találjam ki... Ezt is a Pokolgép ihlette? Hehe.
Csak azért is!

Ja, még valami... Szólj a tesódnak, hogy nyugi, mert akár mennyire is írígy, én nem foglak elhagyni téged, és ezen senki, és semmi nem változtat, még a hisztériás viselkedése sem. Nyafogni nagyon is jól tud... egy elkényeztetett liba.
Csak szólok, még idejében... még mielött elkezd rinyálni.
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Now, after the personal note... I loved your piece! And yes, it's a blessed curse, as you describe it.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Tess? Rá gondolsz? Àh...hagyd a picsába. Mindig csak azon picsog, hogy a kurafi, amelyiknek azért kell, hogy a faszát kirázza, mindig lekoptatja. Majd, egy szép napon, belátja.

[McBear]

The emotion, the feel, the love! It is so overflowing!
Critique:

Make sure when using commas, you use a lowercase after :-)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Somewhere i read, that with poetry, every new line starts with capitalized letters...
anyway thank you :-)

[McBear]

hmm. Alright.

[Obscured by the Shadows]

I.. love it. The emotion, rigor, love and ... everything about it is amazing. Excellent poem, It speaks to me.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Hehe.. :) thank you. :)

[Obscured by the Shadows]

My pleasure, as always.