Screaming My Name

Dark

Flow gasoline in my blood,
Stick spikes, under my nails,
Pour boiling led in my ears,
Bade me in boiling wax,
I don't care,
Yes, I dare, scream my name.
The silence is annoying me,
I wont hold it back,
It's time to set the beast free,
I wont shut my mouth,
Screaming my name,
I'm still alive!
The last rebel,
Last one free.

Cut my tongue out,
Curse me for a thousand years,
Break my ribs,
Break my arms,
Hang me in public,
The silence is annoying me,
I wont hold it back,
I wont shut my mouth,
Screaming my name,
I'm still alive!

Screaming my goddamn name,
I'm still alive,
The last rebel,
On the loose.
Screaming my damned name,
I'm still alive!

No retreat, no surrender,
I don't regret anything,
I got nothing to confess,
No final wish,
If I was born again,
I'd live again, like I did.
Just to go head against the wall.
Even if they got everyone else,
I wont surrender, wont change,
Not to man, not to god, not to anyone.
No goddamn way.
Torture me all you want,
No deal,
Dear devil, go back to hell,
Dear god, go back to heaven,
Leave me alone,
I'm not your game.
Enemies, come, lets fight!
I'll give you a big fright.

Torture me all you can,
I'm screaming my name,
Pain tells me, I'm still alive,
And you're still afraid of doing it,
Afraid of finally killing me,
So you can be happy.

Screaming my goddamn name,
I'm still alive!
Silence is annoying me,
So I'm screaming my name,
As long as I'm alive,
The last rebel.

Author's Note

I know, I'm the reason of all the evil in the world, at least that's how im treated, so i wrote this.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=EPaj5exLa88

Reviews

[RJ]

I hope you don't think that anymore. You aren't evil. If anything society is evil. They're always shunning and outcasting those who are different, even when they grew up with them. All of a sudden they change and it's like all the years they've spent together is gone because society says that change is bad. It's just like religion. All religion's done is get people killed because those people don't believe in THAT religion. I honestly think I'd be better off living in a jungle with no connection to humanity. Humans are different. They aren't perfect. It's like fitting a square block into a circle peg, you have to take something away to make it fit. You have to take away it's differences from the circle.... Does any of this make sense? 0.0

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thou I still prefer creating dark poetry, I don't feel like this anymore. thank you hun. and you're 110% right, but tell that to the blind fools.

[RJ]

Don't call them blind. The blind love without judgement on looks. Society is a monster that judges you on looks. The blind love people for their personalities. Society wants to change their personalities.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

sorry... I meant "those who walk on predifined paths, because they're too scared to taste the freedom, and beauty of life outside. thus they hate us, who dare take our selves out, and go where we want, and do what we want "

[RJ]

*giggles and tackles you kissing you* I love you

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I love you too -kisses back*

[RJ]

*hugs you tightly* I'm never letting you escape

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I sure hope so my goddess

[RJ]

:) !!!

[dan]

Danny, This is a dynamite write, full of vitriol and evil. And I know this is fictional because I know you and you are not evil, you're a very nice young man.
By repeating several phrases several times it serves you as exclamation points on this stream-of-consciousness rant. Telling both god and the devil to go home capped off a particular piece of rage very nicely. This is one of the best writes of yours that I've reviewed. It's going into my library favorites, saved till my computer s***s its pants. Thank you for that.
take care...dan

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yes, well sometimes blood rages through my veins in speeds that make me go nutZ. so I write stuff.read moreYes, well sometimes blood rages through my veins in speeds that make me go nutZ. so I write stuff.
and : " saved till my computer s***s its pants." hahahahaha!!! :D thank you my friend, I always appreciate your thoughts.

[dan]

Don't know if what you say about your blood is real or just a figure of speech, but that's how I feel right now and I'm in the middle of a hypomanic episode (not full-blown mania...a softer feeling). If your being for real maybe you should be checked by a doc? Oh, and look above...it says "read more" but there is no more. Don't get any of that blood on your keyboard. 8^) take care...dan

[Dani The Unreviewed]

lmao... half the comment disappeared ...lol. it was jus some figure of speech. it won't show where I say "your thoughts are always appreciated" :) and a laughing about "till my computer s***s its pants" :D

[dan]

well whaat abowt your blood racing?? are you serriouss? shitt i'm sick

[Dani The Unreviewed]

not literally "raging " jus as an indication, that I'm pissed off. lol.

[Lydia Shutter]

The anger and emotional pain in this is overwhelming.....to the point of being frightening! It is well written. Lydia

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[McBear]

You will be screaming my name,
when I light the fire upon your skin
As I walk away, you burn.
You deserve it.
You finally pay for the misery you caused me.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Go ahead. I'll even buy the gasoline. thank you.

[McBear]

Bro this wasn't aimed at you D: I was adding on to what you had :'(

[Dani The Unreviewed]

on the house... give you a drink too. it's all on the house...lol

[McBear]

Alrighty.. XD

[ExquisiteEyes]

I simply don't know what to say. The anger and pain are so prominent. And you have repeated a few lines many times...it shows your will power to live and fight back.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[AaronFreitas]

All we can do is stay true to ourselves. People will look at us, judge us for reasons out of our control. The best way to counter that is a big f**k you right to there face. Show them that burning fire in your heart and that nothing will bring you down. That's how you do it buddy awesome write :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you my friend :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Here's a song for it.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=EPaj5exLa88

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Scream as much as you want, it is believed to free the soul!
World is one dark place to survive. Do not succumb to it's evil ways.
Passionate and powerful write!
I heard blazing loud music in the background!
Intense and deep!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I'm doing that every day. :) thanks :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Always welcome! :)