Life of An Outcast

My little tribute to the people living around me. sometimes i have enough of their s**t. enjoy. >:D

To me, everything's all the same,
Got no shame,
Me, you can't tame.

In society,
I'm alone, when they stand by me,
I can choose,
But there is no choice,
I can stay,
But I'm not welcome.
They want me to sleep,
But I'm not tired.
They don't give,
But they take,
My smile to them is fake,
No, I don't need fame,
I'm not your goddamn game.

When I'm gone, they don't care,
My memory will be,
That they all forget me.

I live my life all alone,
Live by my rules,
Hunting in the night,
Driven by boiling blood,
Watch out, here's the next big fright!
I don't care what's the odd,
I fear no man, no god,
I know the rule of blood.

Sweet Jesus can save,
So they say,
I don't care,
The devil will punish,
But they all perish,
Under the iron teeth of time,
All their gods,
All the odds.

F**k them,
Goddamn nuts!

I live my life all alone,
Driven by boiling blood,
Fear I do not know,
Got anything to lose?
Hell no.

Nothing you say matters,
Actions speak, louder than feathers of your worthless words,
The lies burn your throat,
Ignorance froze your heart,
Just forget me,
I live my life all alone,
I don't fear your gods,
I don't care bout your words,
Too little, and far too late,
Hope you like the new me,
It's a waste of your words,
Whatever you say, it's all the same to me.

I'm living my life all alone,
Always driven by blood,
Kept warm in the arms of burning passion.
Reborn everyday, in ones desires,
Living in the heaven of his dreams,
Far away from you goddamn freaks.

I'm your last enemy,
Checkmate!
Check tha board mate,
You lost the game.

Author's Note

http://www.google.rs/url?q=http://m.youtube.com/watch%3Fv%3DVWROZHc5vxY&sa=U&ved=0CAsQtwIwAGoVChMIxYLf5J6dyQIVhiQPCh27yQwI&sig2=orHOyaioP6v00E9-7HXDtQ&usg=AFQjCNEZZb5ZRwIBj__Z_F45fR0Mp2klNA

the English version of a Hungarian song, that partly inspired this. hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[ANTO]

The whole of this hinges quite early upon the lines
'they want me to sleep
but Im not tired' - I mean like, wow ! Danny.
This resonates with my early adulthood so much. Well penned.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you my friend.

[ANTO]

The more 'they' want us to sleep - the more invigorated we become :)
Happy Thanksgiving Danny .

[Dani The Unreviewed]

true :) you happy Thanksgiving my friend. :)

[Davidgeo]

Very aggressive and defiant. My English is not yet flawless I cannot detail a better review. BUt I think this your style is agreeable. I look forward to reading your writings.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thank you :)

[KarMarBar]

This is very well-written. We have all felt that way, alone in the world left to our devices. I especially liked your line "Actions speak, louder than feathers of your worthless words." Feathers are so light, so naturally, the words are "worthless." I thought that was a great metaphor! Another line I enjoyed was "Just forget me... I live my life all alone." I feel that way right now about someone in my life. I truly connected to this poem and think it is a job well done. I wish I had more constructive criticism for you, but I enjoyed this poem very much and I cannot quite think of anything negative to say about it. Great job!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thank you very much :D

[AaronFreitas]

I agree with ANTO when he quoted your lines "they want me to sleep but I'm not tired." Those words have such a deeper meaning that what's on the surface. All you can do it continue to fight in search of your own happiness... sometimes all we need is ourself and our will to survive and it makes us that much strong in the end. Nice work :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

exactly :) thank you!

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Intense and emotionally fierce like a whirlwind thrown at you.

Acceptability and approval is the lowest of human desires, dear poet and breaking free of this dark struggle to fit in, is the first step towards self realisation and liberation!

I liked this dark, passionate write, Danny but I hope this is written in the heat of the moment.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

it's written after years of being screwed around with, by everyone around me. it's only adapting to their attitude towards me. nothing special, but having enough of them. my new Bible if i may. (lol) thank you :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Be blessed!
You are welcome.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

btw.. checked your link. xD cool video. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

I know right! It was very funny to watch as the first thing in the morning. Nature and it's ways.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong words led to powerful ending. I like the honest tone and the strength in the description. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :D

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[zunie frost]

this is really ... a perfectly well written poetry !!!! i love this ...specially these lines
In society,
I'm alone, when they stand by me,
I can choose,
But there is no choice,
I can stay,
But I'm not welcome.
They want me to sleep,
But I'm not tired.
They don't give,
But they take,
My smile to them is fake,
No, I don't need fame,
I'm not your goddamn game.
!!!!! really danny you are an awsome writer !!!!! 100% ratings as always !!!!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thank you :-

[zunie frost]

welcome!!!!

[McBear]

I really liked this dude. Full of meaning

[Dani The Unreviewed]

lol. thanks :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

check tha song too. lol. sets a good mood for the write...if the voice would be a bit deeper...lol