Pairing up poetry project

Pairing up poetry project

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
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Written with Alex M.

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In the dreams,
The deepest streams,
Cold, and warm,
In this, believe me, there's no harm
The soundtrack here is dark
Your hands, they hold burn marks
Nowhere to hide,
Get ready for a hell of a ride.
The feeling,
The minds thinking,
The sensation, tingling.
Forget all you know,
Stay for the show,
Regret all you fear,
Drop a tear.
Whit the feeling,
Souls are singing,
Without it, minds are shrieking.
Guess the feeling.


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


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The poem is very good.You and Alex did very well. Nice flow of thoughts leaving the reader with things to ponder. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading :)
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome. I have 11 days off. I will catch-up on my read requests. Always a pleasure to read .. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Okay.. Thank you once again :)

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Dani The Unreviewed
Dani The Unreviewed

Tankcsapda, Agyarország, Germany



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