Best news ever!

Thanks for reading:)

The voice,
Gone for long. it was not my choice
But the world took us apart,
To it i can say, you bloody b*****d!

Hearing his voice,
Is like seeing the rescue helicopter,
After wandering the desert for eternity.

For eternity, spent in hell,
Seeing heaven,
As it is burning,
Hearing god as he is crying,
Picturing as angels are falling,
As the world is failing,
All hope fading.

The realisation,
This time pleasant.
Spread my word through the nation
The end is near,
The end of this damnation.

Now, i say it was all...
It was worth it.
The tears,
The fears,
The terrors,
The errors,
All the pain,
All the rain,
All the dark,
It ends!

For we shall be together once more
Like before,
And therefor,
It all turns right,
Now i see the end of the fight,
Victory, for us, and a fright,
For the demonic night,
Filled with tears.

He killed all my fears.

With what you might ask,
For him, its not a hard task,
All he needed was to call,
For me to hear his voice,
Saying the words,
The words, i thought impossible,
That we will be together again.
It really does not matter when,
But i know the time and the place, I'll manage till then.
A few days,
And we walk all the right ways,
Ways to everlasting love.
Flying free like a dove.

Lol...look at me all carried away...lol. Sorry, i hope you like it.
Reality is that me and my boyfriend will meet in fourteen days, and he'll stay in town for five days, at a relatives place, who is not bothered by our relationship. This is a bloody miracle. Lol. :) i'm the happiest person in the whole universe. Lol. :) :) :) :) :)

Author's Note

I'm so happy! lol. Thank you for reading. :) any thoughts?

Reviews

[Tomoe Tellez]

I should have read this before, this poem is incredible. You truly have a gift to create such wonderful poems. I know many have tell you before, but I have to tell you, you are one of the best poets I have known of. I didn't read much poetry before I saw your work. You have a way of comforting those who feel alone. The third verse is my favorite. You did a great job with this one!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much :)

[Cassie]

Hey Danny, This is very good work

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you for reading.

[wordman]

great expression of your thoughts and emotions,expressed well,guess you are on my fl

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks for the read.

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You do know that i did not ask creator to pile up all that crap he said. And i don't say that i wanna leave so i get feedback...i just don't know why i'm here anymore. i'm sorry for his stupid behaviour.

[wordman]

no problem,i joined because he asked not a group person,not upset with you or him
i will read more,did`nt know you was on my friend list

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay. Just cuz i've read his last message, before the group was deleted.......i think i'll block him.

[andrew mitchell]

A lovely write Danny expressed with true emotion

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you my friend. :) i'm still sure hyper about it lol. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

*Super hyper about it.

[andrew mitchell]

I bet you are lol:):)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol yeah. :) thanks again.

[Dark Poet]

Your rhyming works and flows incredibly well. I can see and feel your story well. It was a captivating poem and i can tell how passionate you were when you wrote it.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much :)

[Creator]

This is simply awesome! From the line, where it says "It ends!" the whole poem is begining its great journey to happiness! It made me smile, and touched me deep down. I mean the fact that you were probably so happy and hyper that you couldn't tell your right hand from the left, but you could write such an amazing poem. Only thing I would suggest is that you move the very end of the poem, over to the authors note. So put the lines that are not part of the poem to the "authors note" field. You are a very talented young poet.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you. :) and i would, but then it wouldn't be an instant write.

[Creator]

You are probably right, then don't change it. Either way, this is an awesome poem. I'm completely stunned by your talent. You are welcome :)

[zaisham9393]

I am so happy 4 u :))) Reading this I can feel falling in love is so beautiful :)!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

It is the most beautiful thing in the whole wide world. :) thank you :)

[AaronFreitas]

Congrats buddy... if you are happy I am happy for you :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :) . :) :)

[closed]

im elated for you
i truly am

then let your pen now be lit anew
to celebrate a miracle

and brighter days ahead IM


-Dream

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much :) :)