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The voice,
Gone for long. it was not my choice
But the world took us apart,
To it i can say, you bloody b*****d!

Hearing his voice,
Is like seeing the rescue helicopter,
After wandering the desert for eternity.

For eternity, spent in hell,
Seeing heaven,
As it is burning,
Hearing god as he is crying,
Picturing as angels are falling,
As the world is failing,
All hope fading.

The realisation,
This time pleasant.
Spread my word through the nation
The end is near,
The end of this damnation.

Now, i say it was all...
It was worth it.
The tears,
The fears,
The terrors,
The errors,
All the pain,
All the rain,
All the dark,
It ends!

For we shall be together once more
Like before,
And therefor,
It all turns right,
Now i see the end of the fight,
Victory, for us, and a fright,
For the demonic night,
Filled with tears.

He killed all my fears.

With what you might ask,
For him, its not a hard task,
All he needed was to call,
For me to hear his voice,
Saying the words,
The words, i thought impossible,
That we will be together again.
It really does not matter when,
But i know the time and the place, I'll manage till then.
A few days,
And we walk all the right ways,
Ways to everlasting love.
Flying free like a dove.

Lol...look at me all carried away...lol. Sorry, i hope you like it.
Reality is that me and my boyfriend will meet in fourteen days, and he'll stay in town for five days, at a relatives place, who is not bothered by our relationship. This is a bloody miracle. Lol. :) i'm the happiest person in the whole universe. Lol. :) :) :) :) :)

Author's Note

I'm so happy! lol. Thank you for reading. :) any thoughts?

Reviews

[Tomoe Tellez]

I should have read this before, this poem is incredible. You truly have a gift to create such wonderful poems. I know many have tell you before, but I have to tell you, you are one of the best poets I have known of. I didn't read much poetry before I saw your work. You have a way of comforting those who feel alone. The third verse is my favorite. You did a great job with this one!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much :)

[Celie Rose]

I really like your love poems..you simply explode with expression and emotion. "Now, i say it was all...It was worth it. The tears, The fears, The terrors, The errors, All the pain, All the rain, All the dark, It ends! This says it all. Well written. Keep writing!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

yea...i used to like this piece. thank you.

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

this is AMAZING POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP up the AMAZING WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

welcome!! :)

[Max]

Ah... I love every single word in this one. You're amazing Danny. The feelings are so clear, and relateable! Sometimes I wonder... How come God gave this talent to you, to someone who clearly showed, that he doesn't believe in God... Still, he gave you such an amazing way with words. And no, I'm not trying to "convert" you. Lol. Just saying.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

That is the closest proof, i could show to prove that no such thing as god exists. If there was a god, it would have given this "talent" you seem to adore so much, to someone who believes in a god. Thanks :)

[Max]

I not only seem to, but I really do adore you, and your writing Danny. You are the best.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you bro. :)

[Max]

Love you sweet bro. :)

[Gee]

Oh to be young and in love.Nicely penned Danny

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :) and yeah, i wish it would last forever, and ever and ever... And i'm totally carried away now... Lol...sorry. Lol. Thank you :)

[Jesse Pruett]

Congrats, you made a great poem by what I think, you two where fighting, and now your making up, right?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

No fighting involved... Long story, but point is, that when parents find out that you're in love with a boy, they freak out... And some even try everything they can, to break the relationship... (Just like his parents did)

[Jesse Pruett]

Ya, makes sense.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Maybe to them, but not to me.

[Jesse Pruett]

parents always freak out, even if it was a girl, they might think that the girl might not be good enough, but anyways I got to go to my grandpas

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Guess you're right. Okay. See you later.

[Shah Sabia]

Such a brilliant poem, i can actually feel the emotions you have potrayed.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks :) :) :) :)

[Shah Sabia]

You're welcome :)
Just a couple of days left now, right ?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yup. :) :) :) not long now.

[Shah Sabia]

Happy for you :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :) :)

[Shah Sabia]

You're welcome :)

[Not here]

great poem danny. i could feel the emotion

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[Treble]

This is wonderful! I love the last line!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

I am so happy for you!!!!! This is a poem of true love and I can feel your emotions pouring out through your words! It is so nice to have some like that!!! 100 rating!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :) i'm still super hyper about it lol :)