Love that is not returned

Love that is not returned

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
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Writer was buggin me to post this...lol. Just kiddin :) hope you like it.

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Waking up every morning,
To the crying, moaning,
Of a pointless, depressed morning.
Its another sunny,
For some, even happy
But for me crapy day.

Its so hard to get up,
I just lay, flat, down, top,
The empty silence,
The cold arrogance,
Of loneliness,
Always in the way of happiness.

The one I love,
Does not love me,
He is flying high, like a dove,
I can't reach him,
I can't fly, the air's too thin,
Hey cruel world, you win.


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


Author's Note

Dani The Unreviewed
Thanks for readin, this was writer's idea, his write, i just edited it a bit. Any thoughts?

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You did a good job editing, tell writer that I like it. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you :) i'll tell him.
Lol. This is awesome :) My idea, but its not worth anything, without your edit. Thank you :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

No problem :)
A writer

9 Years Ago

You are awesome :)
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thanks :) :) :) :)
You're back to talking to writer?

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

yeah... We sorted things out, roughly about a week ago.
A writer

9 Years Ago

Yup. And I'm forever grateful for his understanding, and forgiveness. :)

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Added on July 17, 2015
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Dani The Unreviewed
Dani The Unreviewed

Tankcsapda, Agyarország, Germany



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