Being judged

I'm being judged for a lot of things...

All those monsters,
All those tear hunters,
Who we call people,
Who say we are all equal,
But they believe,
They are superior.

The size of their ego,
Makes me sick,
Here opened door why wont you go
I can't pick,
Who to love.
Why not take off that glove,
And fight like a man.

You're bothered, you feel sick,
You think you've got the right to tell me, who do i give my heart to?
Well, why wont ya go to hell?
Screw you,
I don't care.

I don't expect you to love me,
I can't and i wont.
I wont say you are right,
Cuz in reality, you aint too bright.

What do ya know?
I aint got no more tears to shed,
Enough i had,
I aint afraid of you.
Never cried cuz of you,
Your empty words, aimed at my hurt
Aint worth jack s**t.

Instead of judgement,
Look into yourself,
You still don't care about me,
All you care about is feedin your ego.
You got no right to judge me,
Or anyone else.

Maybe you think your huge ego
Is the way to go,
But it leads one way,
And it aint the right way.

Yeah, you're right,
I aint straight,
But don't feel bothered,
Hmm...maybe you're just a coward.
Hiding behind your lies,
In reality, your worth dies.

You judge me for that,
You also judge me for not believin
All those lies, we call religion.
You judge me for being honest,
For not followin what you call cool
You think i'm a fool,
Cuz i dare to say what i think,
I listen to the music i like,
Not the one that makes you high,
But in reality, not even you like,
You just listen cuz its the "Cool" stuff.

Who the hell cares?!
Ya don't like me one bit,
What? ya think its a lethal hit?
Find someone else you can mess around with.

Kill me, do the world a favor,
Really, its a sweet flavor,
But then do it, don't just tell me,
That the likes of me,
Should be exterminated.

Whoa...watch it,
I'm radioactive,
And spread a million viruses.
So get the hell outta here.

Ya tell me what to do,
How to live my life,
Ya tell me i need help.
I tell ya, its the other way around.
Look into a mirror,and judge the one lookin back at ya.
That one deserved all your empty words.

Author's Note

Venting write. Sorry if it was rude.

Reviews

[Max]

You are so right with this one. It is so relateable. And about people who say they wont judge you... I bet that by now, all your "friends" forgot to say hi, and ask how are you. I know, because that happened to me, after I told them, that I'm not straight. "It's okay, I don't mind. We're your friends, remember?." and a few days later, they forgot about it all.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah, they all forgot about me. Anyway, i really don't care about them anymore. If they really are my friends, then they'll remember me...but it wont happen. Anyway, not important, atleast i know, that you are a real friend. :) I'll close my account. We have a message thread, so we can talk. And if by some miracle they ever think about talking to me, they have one too. Thank you, for really being here. :)

[Max]

Hey, don't close your account. You have us, on here. Well, I for one will be here for you. :) As for those people... It is their loss. They don't know, that they just threw away the greatest friend anyone could ask for. Anyway, I like your new profile pic. :)

[GalaxyGhost]

As a writer, I do a lot of venting through writing, so I completely get this! It's awesome! It's always good to vent, hence the fifty journals I've written. Though not all of it would be venting...Rants are quite therapeutic, too. Also, not everyone you can make happy because your happiness is up to you.

[McBear]

I really liked this dude. I totally understand of this poem. I wish people weren't so judging upon others actions. Ya know?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

i know but people 's understanding is a luxury i never had...

[McBear]

I feel you on a spiritual level..

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree and I liked your thoughts.
"Ya tell me what to do,
How to live my life,
Ya tell me i need help.
I tell ya, its the other way around.
Look into a mirror,and judge the one lookin back at ya.
That one deserved all your empty words."
I tell people. If problems with another. Tell them in private. If need edit. Offer help. We need writers like you. Your words explode with passion and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Your poetry was outstanding. Gave me reasons to write today and you are welcome.

[Shona_Lauren]

Unfortunately people believe they have a right to judge what they think is exceptable or not. They believe they know what is right or wrong and if you don't follow their "standard" then they think they can put you down on it. Of course this is not right and they shouldn't be allowed to get away with it. Who cares if you don't like the same things as you. And it certainly has nothing to do with us over your sexual preferences. You can't help who you fall in love with and nor can I. At some point or another in our lives we will all be judged but you can hold your head high and say your a much better person than they are. Your a talented young man who has such a way with words all your readers can connect to what your saying. Keep doing what your doing and don't give a damn about what anyone else says if they are trying to bring you down, its more than likely they are just jealous.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :) :) :)

[AE]

Filled with potent disgust and charged with raw energy. I understand how you feel for the most part, especially about religion and being pre-judged. Growing up in a "godly" household of ministers isn't all it's cracked up to be when you are agnostic and friends with a bisexual wiccan.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks for the read, and input :) glad you could relate in a way. :)

[Shah Sabia]

I can somehow relate to it :)
Nice write.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you so much :)

[closed]

Judge not and you shall not be judged
that's in the Bible

so if anyone who asserts to be a Christian judges you
tell them that


-Dream

[Dani The Unreviewed]

i know...but do you think they'd take it seriously? i mean, when someone dares to twist the words of the God they supposedly worship...then tell me, will they take the words of an atheist seriously?

[Creator]

That is what we should all follow, in order to live a relatively good life. I mean in society.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

We *SHOULD* but most people do not.

[Creator]

This time it is unfortunate, but you are right.