I hate you!

To the readers: i don't hate any of you.

You hate me,
Always did.
Show some respect,
And don't show up at my funeral.
Cry all you want,
I'll come back to hunt.
Aint no tears savin your sorry a*s,
So kick it, hit the bass.

Remember the day?
Its the one you'll regret.
Whatever you wanna say,
Put it away,
I don't care.
Had your chance,
You're too late, Last dance.
Guess whats in my hands?
One is for sure You aint sayin thanks

Aint nobody savin you,
Damn fool.
Pray all you want,
It don't matter cuz i'm here to hunt
So why don't you just jump?
Make things easier for me,
Spare me the trouble,
Spare me the time i need to find ya.

Go, run, hide,
Open your eyes wide,
A second, and You're tied.
Where's your pride?
Did your hope just go, or it died?
Look me in the eyes,
Don't say you're sorry,
Cuz you're not.
I aint no nut,
So spare your lies,
Even your last lines,
Lets just skip the bullshit,
And get to the part when you die.

Reviews

[closed]

morbid
and antagonistic at that

it really excites the reader, and spurs them on as if they were getting ready to watch a fight or something

creative IM


-Dream

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[A writer]

Wow wow wow... wow! Take it easy Danny boy. You're really not cool when you get mad (but I bet you're still cute) ((sorry...side thoughts interrupting... Lol)) So... Someone hates you, and you hate em back... Right? Well, I know it takes a lot to make you upset, so who ever it is, he's an a*****e. But, still, the angel on my right shoulder says to tell you don't hate anyone... And the devil on the left says to me "Shut the f**k up!" lol. Sorry. Now to the poem. Very well written, as always Danny.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol. i'm with the devil... Lol. Thanks for readin.

[A writer]

And you're certainly the cutest devil ever. Lol :) you are always welcome Danny.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol. Okay, i think we're friends again, just like before. :)

[A writer]

Apart from the greatest mistak I ever made, that is upseting you... I will not forgive myself that. I should have just keep my big mouth shut... But no. I had to say it. Jesus... I really hate myself for that. Will you ever forgive me Danny?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay...i think it was supposed to be "I should have kept" instead of "Should have keep"... Anyways, my answer is: Hell NO! LOL TOTALLY GOT YOU! hahaha. Sorry... Had to break the tension. I did forgive you already. What else you want?

[A writer]

You joker :) lol. As for what else I want... Or better said, what I dare to dream of... I think you wont, because you can't give me that, and I should stop dreaming about it. I'm really happy that you could forgive me :) You really are the greatest :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay, okay. Its all cool. Don't get over enthusiastic about it...lol.

[A writer]

Your wish is my command. Lol. But really, I can't say it enough, I love you Danny. With all my being.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay............its your call...

[A writer]

:) It would be an honor to stand by you when you need someone, to hold you close. To just wake up, knowing that we can spend some time together. Just to see you smile. To hug you, to... I'm sorry, I've got carried away.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Don't sweat it. It happens when you're in love. Just keep it under controll.

[A writer]

Its really hard. But I'll do it, if thats what you wish.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay, thats exactly it. Why can't you just stop lovin me?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay dumb question. Anyways, just try.

[A writer]

I can't just stop loving you. You are too cute, and too awesome :) But I will try to controll it.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks :) alright, enough said about that.