You made me what I am

You made me what I am

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
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Lot of nonsense

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Trees sway,
As wind clears the way,
Let go, they scream to the ground,
Pieces of the world flying around,
The holiness of the word,
Its gone, god's ears are deaf,
Put your faith to force or you're dead.

As i walk these streets i feel dread
The world around is dead,
Shaking heads of angels.

Cursing god,
For falling for every lie,
Want to be a hero? Go die,
God, You made me what I am.


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


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This reminds me of how people play gods with lives without question of how ethical it is. Recently I came across a weird string of videos addressing this guy's experiment of a homunculus. I don't think it's real, but it just proves my point that people should definitely have more humbleness. Too many people idolize themselves on their riches, but the poorest are the happiest. True happiness cannot be bought.

Posted 8 Years Ago


one needs to vent sometimes to let the good air back in!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Just say it how you feel it... sometimes we all have these negative moments and we need it out.. a vent to clear the mind!
very raw and honest....As you always are Ethan!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you:)
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Blunt and straight ahead, right to the point. Telling God to die? I'm not an expert on religion but that is an awfully brave line to write, you might get some negative feedback from that. But I like your honest approach and delivery. Nicely done. take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Not tellin god. Just to those people who act like they're god.
I love your writes when you spill your emotions buddy.. another awesome piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Tankcsapda, Agyarország, Germany



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