A moment trapped in time

It is a poem. I think...

Walking in the crowd,
No, i aint proud,
I'd rather hide under a shroud.
Whats with the rest?
How come they say i'm the best?
I've got nothin not even a little rest

Just a simple life,
Dancin on the edge of a knife.
There is very little light,
Sometimes there is none,
Maybe just one...
No strength to continue the flight,
Not even enough to fight.
The callin blue sky,
Too far, too high,
The safe, solid ground,
Too far, too down,
The world's swirling around.

Demons in a chaotic dance,
Just a glance,
And i realise... Got nothin left,
But the demon sea,
That not even god can see,
My soul is unknown...
Even to me, its closed,
The further i go,
The more i hate what i see,
Black, evil memories.

The terror dripping from its mouth,
The monster, the secret side of me,
That i never let you see,
Its under a lock,
In a cage, throw away the key.

Scratching on the walls,
In the closet, in the halls,
In my body, in my head.
Someone stop this monster!!

Author's Note

Letting it all out. Thanks for readin.

Reviews

[Creator]

Hello my friend. :) I am back to reviewing. Well, this one could be interpretted in more ways than one. And one is more powerful, and mysterious than the other. But, as for me, the meaning I will note, is the one that is obvious to anyone and everyone who reads this poem. So, one of the things this could be about, is your secret side, one that is dark, one that is powerful, and not so well known to everyone, and as you stated, it is not so well known... Not even to yourself. As always, your poetry is awesome. Please, keep writing.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much :) and i will.

[Creator]

I really hope that you will be writing more. And you are welcome :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW ... Very very INTENSE. I just wonder how U play so well with the words. Ur each line is a beautiful mystery. As always I LOVED LOVED LOVED reading Ur poem!!
Keep writin' :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I don't know how to describe it...guess it just flows out. Thanks for readin :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

OH Then it is a SPECIAL GIFT to you! And U're WELCOME!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

:) You're too kind :) :)