Letter to my love *part one*

A fraction of an email I've sent to my love

Good morning my dear. I hope your family treats you well, and that you can handle the pain of being apart. I'm hoping for a lot, yet I know that most of these hopes, and wishes are pointless. Well, not exactly pointless, rather incapable to help your situation, because I can't be with you. I wish I could heal your broken heart, to give you all the love you missed, to fill in the gaps, to help you out of this pain. I wish I could see you one more time...what am I saying? I wish we could be together, forever, in love, forever young, hot headed teens, without having to grow up, so we could live the wonders of this world in their most beautiful moments, in their maximum beauty. I wish our hearts could be close enough so they can tell each other how fast to beat. I miss the long hours, that now seem to be shorter than the shortest moments in life, the beautiful moments, that we wish to always live in. I miss your sweet kisses, I miss your smiles, I miss your ever so bright, blue eyes, I miss your warming presence, I miss the essence of love, and joy in life... I miss you, I miss your ever so playful self, the ever so beautiful soul, that is always innocent, always so full of life. I miss you my dearest. But I love you more. Every day, every hour, every minute, every second we spent together I loved you more and more. The fire never died, it only kept growing. Even now, I love you with all my being. I wish you all the joy, and all the love my heart could, can, and always will give to you. Allow me to end my lines with my never dying love, blessings and best wishes.

Danny.

Author's Note

Unfortunately... He could not respond. Maybe i will post the rest of the email... Maybe not... We'll see. Thanks for reading

Reviews

[closed]

sometimes the best way to cope with a traumatic scenario is to do something like this

writing a letter to ourselves (or so to speak in this case) can be a great release of pent up/negative emotion

this was really heartfelt

even though there hasn't been a response to this letter to him yet

i hope it freed you of some of your pain IM...


sincerely

-Dream

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thawl you :)

[Creator]

Oh my dear God! This piece speaks of such devotion, so strong love. I really admire the way you write, and I must admit, that somehow, this reminds me of a documentary film, in which a few letters were read... Letters from kings and queens, and other members of royal families to each other. If I recal correctly, then it was about the royal family in England maybe? Point is, that this letter is simply beautiful the way it is. I'd suggest to check for grammar issues, and such, but in this case, those minor errors do not ruin the quality of the story. Nice job.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Wow wow :) thank you so much for your feedback. Only if everyone would say what they think...like you do. :)

[Creator]

Yes, if only... And you are welcome. :)

[A writer]

Well Danny, anyone you write about is blessed! Your talent is gorgeous. I bet if he could read this, it would make him happy. :) I'm sorry, I know I'm not the most welcomed person to review anything you wrote about your boyfriend. But I can't help it, I'm sorry.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Its okay. Just don't say stuff like you did to me.... And its all good.

[A writer]

I'm terribly sorry for that. I did regret it. I love you Danny. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I know... Thats what i'm afraid of.

[A writer]

Why be afraid of me, Danny?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Cuz you're desperatly tryin to get me to cheat on my boyfriend. And that aint happenin! ever.

[A writer]

I'm not trying to get you to cheat on him. Just trying to tell you that I love you.

[africa]

A beautiful heartfelt rendering of love. Outstanding writing!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[Cool Girl]

This is so beautiful and precious.. Oh Danny, your words are do sweet and meaningful. How I wish I could just bring you two together again. But as you know, I will always love you. You're my brother after all :)

Your dear sister,

Aless

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I know sis:) i love you :)

[Cool Girl]

I love you too! :)

[Joel Armstrong]

It's said love is immeasurable. To love unconditionally, loving both the dark and the light parts of our very being......This represents that very love.Thank you for sharing this with us
And I do hope he has seen this message.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Maybe he did. But he couldn't respond. Thank you :)

[sereenaoutloud]

wow, beautiful. You feel the love in every word , the devotion how much you adore him!! Its just a gorgeous write Ethan!! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[dan]

The wish to be young forever sadly won't come true, but don't fret. Some really great things will happen to you even when you get "WAY OLD," like me. A famous poet or writer once wrote that, "Youth is wasted on the young." In other words when you are, say, thirty you will say to yourself, "I wish I could be 19 again knowing what I know now." Enjoy the entire journey and smell the roses as they pass you by. take care...dan

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yup. Thanks :)

[Jesse Pruett]

nooo! There working on a potion!!!!!!

[Max]

What potion? lol.

[Jesse Pruett]

The Potion of Life.

[Max]

Oh... And I thought of everlasting youth. Which would be quiet cool! lol.

[Jesse Pruett]

YES afdkjfosdhg, that's my english

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol. What's the arguement? lol

[Jesse Pruett]

If you can live forever

[Max]

Not only live forever, but live forever and forever preserve your youth. Which would automatically mean no room for natural death = no aging = no dying. (Naturally) lol.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Aha! so you already have the formula! lol. Now you only have to make that potion... Lol.

[Jesse Pruett]

No! I don't have it. They do. I just know thev'e been formulating it for years now.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Aha! so they do! (But i have no idea who are they... Lol)

[Jesse Pruett]

I know right!!?!! They need to share! My mummy has always told me "Jesse.....You know you better give him your waffles right!!!!"

[Max]

Lol. No, wrong! i better steal it! and i've got no clue what i'd do forever...wait, i know! hehehe...

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You steal it?! you would steal from me?!

[Max]

Why? did you make it?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

No, i stole it first. Hahaha.

[Max]

You're so cruel. Lol.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I know, i know. Lol

[Jesse Pruett]

Split it? and share it with loved ones?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah. I'd share with my boy. :)

[Jesse Pruett]

:( I think you can split it a couple more times, or give me a slurp, and put the rest on ebay.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Nah...i'd split it in five parts... I'd give one to my boy, one to each sister of mine, and one to you. And i'd destroy the formula, so no one else gets it. Lol.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

On second thought... I'd give half to my boy and i'd take the other half. Then i'd make another bottle for my sisters.

[Jesse Pruett]

So do I get one or what? and I might experiment with it.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yes, no problem. One bottle for you... That would be ten million dollars please. Lol. Just kiddin, take yours. :)

[Jesse Pruett]

OH MY GODDDD! IM GONNA SHARE IT WITH THE BUGS THAT KEEP ATACKING MY LIGHTS AT NIGHT, GIVE SOME TO MY DOG, AND MAYBE SELL THE REST TO MY FAMILY.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha... Just don't give it to too many people...otherwise it'll be worth a lot less....and now that i know this...maybe I'll just keep it away from everyone, and destroy the whole thing before it could get out.

[Max]

Two best possible choices for the good of everyone: Either give some to everyone and everything in this world, so no one, and nothing gets left out... Or don't give a single drop to anyone, or anything. Destroy it all. But I know, that Danny would keep it all to himself and his boyfriend... Hahahaha... Lol.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Hahaha! how did you know?

[Max]

I do know you... Lol. It wasn't that hard to figure out. Hehehehehe... Lol.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Hell, i think i'd give it all to my boy, and let him decide what to do with it. If he would drink it all, fine, his beauty would be a shame to lose, and that way it would always be the same, here, for the world to adore. :) makin this cruel, s**t we live in, a better, more bearable place.

[Max]

That is so cute!

[A writer]

Geez... More than thirty comments. My god... Lol.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

It's never borin in the cafe...lol.

[Jesse Pruett]

well, it's a good thing that they just finished a second copy