Good morning my dear. I hope your family treats you well, and that you can handle the pain of being apart. I'm hoping for a lot, yet I know that most of these hopes, and wishes are pointless. Well, not exactly pointless, rather incapable to help your situation, because I can't be with you. I wish I could heal your broken heart, to give you all the love you missed, to fill in the gaps, to help you out of this pain. I wish I could see you one more time...what am I saying? I wish we could be together, forever, in love, forever young, hot headed teens, without having to grow up, so we could live the wonders of this world in their most beautiful moments, in their maximum beauty. I wish our hearts could be close enough so they can tell each other how fast to beat. I miss the long hours, that now seem to be shorter than the shortest moments in life, the beautiful moments, that we wish to always live in. I miss your sweet kisses, I miss your smiles, I miss your ever so bright, blue eyes, I miss your warming presence, I miss the essence of love, and joy in life... I miss you, I miss your ever so playful self, the ever so beautiful soul, that is always innocent, always so full of life. I miss you my dearest. But I love you more. Every day, every hour, every minute, every second we spent together I loved you more and more. The fire never died, it only kept growing. Even now, I love you with all my being. I wish you all the joy, and all the love my heart could, can, and always will give to you. Allow me to end my lines with my never dying love, blessings and best wishes.
Hello Danny. I like your story. Expressing your emotions can be a comfort when you are hurting. Am sorry you got no response. Keep your head high and continue being you. Well written. Keep writing.
You are so romantic!
Beautiful, heartfelt piece, Danny.
There are many lines that could be turned into a new poem.
Words throb!
Amazing!
Hope you got your response, equally lovingly!
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
yea, i got my response months ago ..lol. thank you :)
8 Years Ago
Good to know. Equally romantic reply ha? :p
8 Years Ago
yea, until he cheated on me...to avoid confusion, this was written for my ex. while we were still to.. read moreyea, until he cheated on me...to avoid confusion, this was written for my ex. while we were still together.
8 Years Ago
Oh well. Okay.
8 Years Ago
yea it is. I'm over it. :)
8 Years Ago
Happy to know that. :)
8 Years Ago
Thanks :) you're so nice :)
about to post a poem for Thanksgiving. so watch your news.. read moreThanks :) you're so nice :)
about to post a poem for Thanksgiving. so watch your newsfeed. :) it's written for friends. :)
I really enjoyed reading this. It is captivating reading from a first person perspective into the life of a relationship. I love how fondly you spoke of this person.
So if there is a second half, why did you not post it? This is good stuff, was the other stuff not as good in your mind?
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Nope... That one is way tooooo personal. So yeah, that one's not gonna get published... Atleast, not.. read moreNope... That one is way tooooo personal. So yeah, that one's not gonna get published... Atleast, not today. (And i accidentally deleted it from my clipboard...lol)
Ah, the things we do, and write when we're in love... It is simply amazing, how sincere, and beautiful this piece is. I beg of you, post the second half of this. I'm eager to read it.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you. :) and i'm sorry...i wont post it, cuz i deleted it from my clipboard. Anyway, thanks aga.. read moreThank you. :) and i'm sorry...i wont post it, cuz i deleted it from my clipboard. Anyway, thanks again.
9 Years Ago
Oh... But... Nevermind... You are always welcome. :)
OH GOD ... It made me cry. It is the most Loveliest email I've ever read. U have a great sense of playing with words. I love the way U have described Ur love for ur loved one! I wish U two meet and be together FOREVER and let the rest of the world see the love U people share, it might melt their heart!
Thanks for sharing it!
Woaah too good.
"I wish our hearts could be close enough so that they can tell each other how fast to beat". I found this cute :')
It is soul touching.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much :) :)
9 Years Ago
Always welcome.
Stay blessed :)
Did he respond by the way ?
9 Years Ago
Yeah, he called. But he did not see the email... Long story. Point is he called :)
9 Years Ago
Cheers for the call, i wish he could read this.
Anyways it was truly a pleasure reading this.. read moreCheers for the call, i wish he could read this.
Anyways it was truly a pleasure reading this, i hope i can listen to the long story someday :)
Yeah, in twelve days he is going to read it, cuz he will be back with me. :) and sure, i'll tell you.. read moreYeah, in twelve days he is going to read it, cuz he will be back with me. :) and sure, i'll tell you the story :)
9 Years Ago
Just 12 says, not an issue then.
I'll wait for these days to get over soon.
May you gu.. read moreJust 12 says, not an issue then.
I'll wait for these days to get over soon.
May you guys stay together forever.
And yeah, i'll be waiting for the story ;)