Die!

Die!

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
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Written in the hopes that my emotions die...didn't work.

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Again,
They drain,
All my brain,
Dead pain,
In the heart ache.

New ground they claim,
Bring a lot more pain,
More...I want to gain, more pain.
Enough for my feelins to finally die,
So I can break free and fly.

Why can't you just die?!
Die!!!


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


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Why would you want your feelings to die? I guess they caused too much pain... Right? But, if your feelings die, you wont be human. Because, our feelings are the reason that we are human. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A writer

9 Years Ago

I see. But that wont happen... No one can kill his feelings.... Or choose which one to kill. Just ke.. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

I know that :) thanks :)
A writer

9 Years Ago

Any time :)

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Added on June 30, 2015
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Dani The Unreviewed
Dani The Unreviewed

Tankcsapda, Agyarország, Germany



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