My angel

Remembered the short period of actually being loved...it is also painful.

Every day,
Life is fake,
When you are not here,
My soul will fade.

Your beautiful face,
Your voice guides through the maze
Your arms protect against all harm,
Your hugs ever so warm.

My guardian angel,
My guide,
My cutie.

I look into Your blue eyes,
Two infinite oceans,
Feeling freedom,
Ever so bright blue,
Ever so mighty, powerful.

Your beautiful face,
Ever so tempting,
Even now, at this poem's ending.

Author's Note

Its all for now...after my feelins get a normal pace again... i will write more.

Reviews

[Ryan Henderson]

Great write! Lot's of emotion in this piece, I can tell that you're writing from your own experience, the analogies you used were awesome and the vocabulary was refined. The end came off as a cliff hanger of sorts, but it also seems as if it signifies the abrupt end of a relationship. Awesome job!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yes, exactly. :) thank you very much :)

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome write IM.... I love the emotion in this write! I definitely can relate to those feelings, the hurt and pain my friend.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[R Smith]

plenty of emotion and sense of loss is pouring from the page, a great work of love and romance now come to an end, the first four lines set the scene and are a work of perfection, although i can sympathize with the loss and pain i must applaud the way you took negativity and made it positive for this superb writing :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Sometimes even i dare to dream of the bad things turning better... Thank you :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Awww ... You're GREAT at writing LOVE POETRY! You put beautiful emotions into them. You have expressed your feelings in an adorable way!
LOVE IT! ^_^
Keep writing!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[sereenaoutloud]

My guide, my cutie.. this just leaped of the page for me. Yes missing them is the painful side of being in love. Everything has an opposite to maintain balance
Brilliant write Ethan!! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :) and yeah, it hurts like hell.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Btw... About the name... LOL.

[sereenaoutloud]

you are totally Ethan,..remember i knighted you so..cant take it back now! lol

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Hahahahahaha :) :) lol. Long live the queen! :) :) :) lol

[sereenaoutloud]

LMSO... curtsy :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

ALOL...BAGL

[sereenaoutloud]

ok my old brain needs educated BAGL ??

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Bust A Gut Laugh. Lol

[sereenaoutloud]

OH lol..noted... for a moment i was like BAGEL huh? hehehe

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol :) :) :) CBLTH... ALOL :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol. Sorry... Had a lot of gigs waitin to get out.

[sereenaoutloud]

oh geez now you added another one i dont blooming know... CBLTH? geez just say LMAO.. i know that one heheheh

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Its simple... CAN'T BREATH LAUGHIN TOO HARD...but i think it was over done, cuz i'm still breathin... Lol:)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Besides....if i did laugh my a*s off...then how could i sit up straight? lol :-)

[sereenaoutloud]

glad ya still breathing geez i dont want a murder on my hands!!
You got a point.. LMSO then .... i know that one too and laughing your socks off dont hurt anyone or stop ya breathing! May leave a wee smelly feet smell but we can handle that ! :)) heheh

[Dani The Unreviewed]

ALOL. :) :) :) haha true :)

[sereenaoutloud]

well thank you for filling me in ...i now have 2 more to add to my list... and i know who to ask if dont know... heheheh

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Feel free to ask. I know a few more... Lol :)

[sereenaoutloud]

you will regret that lol... i be like.. ..hey whats this mean...
The next day Hey Ethan? whats this mean?
Yo Ethan someone said this whats it mean?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay...then i'll just google it, and see what i find. lol.

[sereenaoutloud]

your awesome sauce...
See there you go on ya missions again
see Ethan is perfect name for ya!:)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yup....lol :) :) :) hahahaha. Now i'm holdin the record in the person with the most names category... Lol :-)

[sereenaoutloud]

LOL. thats too funny... how many you have now?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Idk... Lol. But i guess around ten? lol

[sereenaoutloud]

OMG... lol

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yup... out of that, around six...maybe seven is from my boyfriend. A writer calls me Mister popularity. Lol. You call me Ethan, and many call me IM. Lol. :)

[sereenaoutloud]

awww thats cute Ethan,, your boyf having all the names for you!! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

...Yeh. :-)