My angel

My angel

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
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Remembered the short period of actually being loved...it is also painful.

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Every day,
Life is fake,
When you are not here,
My soul will fade.

Your beautiful face,
Your voice guides through the maze
Your arms protect against all harm,
Your hugs ever so warm.

My guardian angel,
My guide,
My cutie.

I look into Your blue eyes,
Two infinite oceans,
Feeling freedom,
Ever so bright blue,
Ever so mighty, powerful.

Your beautiful face,
Ever so tempting,
Even now, at this poem's ending.


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


Author's Note

Dani The Unreviewed
Its all for now...after my feelins get a normal pace again... i will write more.

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Great write! Lot's of emotion in this piece, I can tell that you're writing from your own experience, the analogies you used were awesome and the vocabulary was refined. The end came off as a cliff hanger of sorts, but it also seems as if it signifies the abrupt end of a relationship. Awesome job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Yes, exactly. :) thank you very much :)



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I am enjoying your love poems. Strong emotion, devotion and expression. You write such great love poems. Another part of you. Well written. Keep writing Danny.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This poem is rather cute. Very well written, I could clearly feel your devotion to your boyfriend. Awesome poem. I really have no suggestions on how to make it better, because it is as good as it gets. Keep writing my friend. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Creator

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome :)
I loved it a lot I applaud you mister/misses Infernal

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
A beautiful write. I love angel poems!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

That makes two of us. Thank you :)
Great write! Lot's of emotion in this piece, I can tell that you're writing from your own experience, the analogies you used were awesome and the vocabulary was refined. The end came off as a cliff hanger of sorts, but it also seems as if it signifies the abrupt end of a relationship. Awesome job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Yes, exactly. :) thank you very much :)
Can I just tell you I love this? The poem was great, but my boyfriends eyes are blue so when you mentioned that color specifically my heart turned in my chest and allowed me to connect to the poem a little bit more. I love this also because of the message, the poem is rather sad. You captured gain and loss so perfectly. When a person saves you from the world itself then just disappears from your life it's hard to cope with and it feels like you lost a piece of yourself. Nice poem.


Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much. :) :) :) :)
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I've actually had my life touched by an angel; don't know if it was a cutie but it didn't much matter I was just so thankful. It made me find a whole bunch more religion than I had previously thought possible. Oh..so you WEREN'T being literal? Never mind, nice write. take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Forever etched in your life of memories. A great write IM and life is hard emotionally with love and loss and starting a new!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Yup. Thank you :)
and so we immortalize our loved ones
continuing to defy life and death with our pens

sincere writing IM


-Dream

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Exactly :) thanks :)

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