Son of war

STOP ALL WARS!!!

HEeeeeeaaaaaaAy!!!

The son of war,
Born on order, with a steel bar,
Instead of a heart.

He was always aggressive,
Never laughed,
Never played football,
Never felt love,
All hate.

He was not fed by his mother,
But he fed on the blood of others,
On the bread of those who starved,
On the terrors and horrors,
On the tears, on the rotting bodies
Of all around him.

He was satisfied
After a great sacrifice,
Of millions of lives,
After he burned everything,
After he killed everyone
After he destroyed the world.

NO, lets NOT dig millions of graves,
Because of one,
NO, let it not haunt us any more,
NO, don't let more death be born.

Author's Note

Instant write (as always) any thoughts?

Reviews

[dan]

Children born since 9/11 have known nothing BUT war since they were able to understand and probably many of them have become jaded about the topic, like it's a zillion miles away and 'Why should I care?' It's always refreshing to hear a young voice shouting for peace. Well done. take care...dan

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Wars were, are, and always will be pointless waste of lives, and unimaginable damage to nature. Therefore... IT ALL HAS TO STOP! thanks for reading :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

It really don't matter how far away it is... Just think about this... What if it was happening there, in your home, in your streets, in your own backyards...what would you do if the rest of the world would say "why should i care"?

[dan]

Hey I'm opposed to endless war myself. And I DO care. There's no need to debate me I'm with you on this. I'm a Navy veteran proud to have served but am totally opposed to war unless it is taking place on our soil. dan

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I'm not sayin anythin about you:) i said that about those who say "why should i care".

[andrew mitchell]

scary times we live in and the horrors those innocent people suffered till no more. Nice write

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[sereenaoutloud]

It is so sad and so hard to have peace when the world is full of people who will kill/harm others without a second thought!! :(

Love this write it is a strong voice! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Sooo... You writin anythin new?

[sereenaoutloud]

lol yeh playing around with something between reviews...
How you doing today?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Feelin okay :) you?

[sereenaoutloud]

yep doing good.
Super hot over here today though :(

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Hope it cools off soon :) our weather is quiet enjoyable :)

[sereenaoutloud]

really ? we are 107 and it is only 11am.. :(
So you been writing?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I was busy all day... Anyways, i'm about to write a nice poem :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

11 AM? its 8 PM here.

[sereenaoutloud]

yeh you are 9hrs ahead,...like my family they are 8 hrs ahead...
really if you think about it you are in the future and i am in the past hehehe

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol. :) now, now, i'm in no hurry... Lol :) :)

[sereenaoutloud]

hehehehe :)

[Satan]

You've got the heart of a lion infernal, keep on roaring for peace brother ;)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks :) and i will.

[ANTO]

You penned a good myhtological piece here I.M.
Some superb lines in it and has the feel of a genuine plea to your peers.
Such honourable sentiment.
Good one.
:)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[A writer]

Add a good melody, and this can be a heavy metal song ;) I love the start, with the scream! Totally agree, STOP WARS! I love your writes. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :) :) :)

[A writer]

You are always welcome :) :) :) I love reading your writes :)