This morning

In the chains,
That bind my brains
At night...

The shock, still living,
The darkness, still daring.
An image from the many,
From the nightmares, of reality...

At night, seeing dark things,
At day, expressing feelings.
Another morning,
Another hopeless moaning
Of the realisation...
You're not here.

Sleep paralysis from the past night,
Wait..this aint right,
I'm too tired to fight,
Whether it be wrong or right,
I've got no hope in sight.

The illness without cure,
That corrupts mind, make it unpure
And all i can say bout it, is "F**k"

Crawl out of bed,
Careful, don't hit your head.

The drunk feeling,
Of not awake but not dreaming,
A cup of coffe steaming.
As thoughts begin their streaming.

Author's Note

Any opinions are welcome :)

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Life brings darkness as well as light. It's a cycle, if there's night there will be day.

A passionate, gloomy write...
May you embrace happiness soon.

I especially liked the second half!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks for the read :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.

[McBear]

Hmm.. This is very good, mah man. Thank you for sharing.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

you're welcome.

[Max]

That's how it feels after waking up from a mind killing intense nightmare, that didn't want to end. Very well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

I know the feelings in the poetry.
"The drunk feeling,
Of not awake but not dreaming,
A cup of coffe steaming.
As thoughts begin their streaming."
I was a soldiers and gave the P.T still feeling the effect of the night before. Great description of paying the price. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks for readin.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Not here]

i really enjoyed reading this :) you described all of the feelings perfectly. great job

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[andrew mitchell]

IM you nailed this in a write that is Mt Everest in your writes. Power Plus and so enjoyed!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you for readin :)

[micky]

Wow this is a really awesome piece I love....great job IM:)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you:)

[Sari Segale]

I can relate to"not awake but not dreaming, looking for healing ,the light in your thoughts, sweet and powerful, "the nightmare of reality", well expressed feelings.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

MIND BLOWING!!! I can really totally relate myself to your this Poem! You have done some GREAT job here, you have expressed your feelings intensely and beautifully. I bet many can relate. Thanks for sharing an AMAZING piece of poetry!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you sooooo much :) you've got no idea how much that means to me, coming from you :) :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

YOU ARE WELCOME :) :) :)

[MsJewel]

You did a wonderful job of sharing some dark and powerful emotions in this well written piece. Brilliant writing!

:) Julie

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you for readin :)