Collaboration with my dear sister, Cool Girl.

I hope you all like it. :)

With you, there's a reason to live,
To you, all my being I give.
In the dark of night
So bright you shine,
I am fine,
Because all I can see is you.
I need you,
More thame you ever knew,
And you need me too.

A gentle warmth,
In the cruelest cold,
A blazing fire,
In my burning heart
Burn every part.

You are all I have,
A string of life,
In the net of despair.
A shot of light,
In the pitch black dark.
The goal is far,
But we will make it together.
Wont let you go, ever.
Help me take a stand,
Come, take my hand,
Keep your head up,
I'm always there,
With you.
You are always here,
Here with me.

Our hands so far,
But our souls so close
Loved you are,
By my heart.

Author's Note

Any thoughts?

Reviews

[wordman]

a beautiful write full of sentiment
check line 8

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[wordman]

you`re welcome,tell cool girl hello

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I would if she would open her profile... Anyways, we'll see if she answers my previous messages

[wordman]

tell her to get back on here,we can defeat any troll

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I'm afraid its not about trolls this time. I don't really know what was going on...she changed a little...and she does not tell me everything like she used to. I feel like we're drifting apart again...

[Dani The Unreviewed]

But without worries. :) i'll tell her. :)

[wordman]

if we don`t know we can`t help her.she thinks she has been hacked,if so it`s probally from our troll or someone she knows..the sites that has been closed is by choice don`t know about the other two
that claim they was hacked but my guess it`s from here

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Look...i don't know if that troll was really responsible for the hacking...and i found out, how the accounts were hacked. By the use of key logger viruses. Scan your device often, and keep antivirus always running when you are online. I found such a virus on my own device...oh... And when your browser asks permission to download, or run a java or flash applet, deny the request...cuz thats one way for the virus to get on your device...once it is on, it will acces all your private information, every username, email, password, everything...so be careful.

[wordman]

well danny our troll does this type of stuff,he got 2 of my e mails and 1 of johns
he even commented i was protected and accused me of blocking my addressesbut of course it is my virus protection that does it

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Oh...i see. Well, spread the word of virus danger, and tell everyone you know to check their devices more often. He is powerless without his viruses. If those key loggers can't make it to your device, you are safe. One more thing...have your fire wall alway prompt you about applications trying to acces the internet. Just another step to make sure. Stay safe.

[Creator]

Any thoughts?! I have a few, let me share them with you. :) This is a beautiful poem! Sisterly love can not be described with words, yet I can clearly see from the words you used, both in the poem, and describing your sister as "My dear sister" that you must be really close, and that is good! No poem can ever tell how good it is to have a sister, but this is probably as close as it gets. This one also brought up some tears in my eyes, since my sister died in a car accident, three years ago. Funny thing is we usually always fighting about something when we couldn't agree immediatly...and said words that none of us really meant to say... Only now that she is gone, I realise how much I love her, and now I miss her every day. Nice job.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[Creator]

You are very welcome :) Keep writing and I will be reading :)

[ANTO]

Defineitely one of the best collabs on here. You guys have a symbiosis that is lacking in some collabs a(nd is prettty evident) but anyone would be hard pressed to find the join between you and CG in this IM.
Such commitment to friendship!!
bravo

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you my friend :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW! You really can express your feelings in words ... In fact, you are GREAT in expressing your feelings! I love reading your poems because I FEEL THEM. Like I can relate with them, you write from the Heart, don't you? You nailed it every time ^_^ As it is said "No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. No surprise in the writer, no surprise in the reader ." -Robert frost. Besides, about the poem it is LOVELY!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

You are WELCOME! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

:) :) :) :) :) :)

[closed]

the bond you guys have as companions shines vividly in this writing
it expresses the intimate need you have for one another

and the desire you possess to get through the tough times together

when i read this it makes me think about the fact that sometimes all of us, as a circle of friends...
we're here for one another...

but then there are times that we aren't...

and sometimes that's just because of circumstances
since we can't always be here for one another

but this poem shows that no matter what happens...
we remain friends


there was a time when you guys might not have been talking as much
something i know actually

but now youre close again

all of us have that on and off again with one another consistently
me, you two, David, Lizardo, Steven and others


the greatest thing your poem shows guys is that with our pens we can always find our way back to one another again

why?

because writing is a gift

and because true friends

are 4ever


-Dream

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Wow :) thanks. :) and what you have said is true.

[B]

Oh my
nothing like that sisterly love
Heals all
and is so warm and kind to the soul
never feeling alone
and knowing it's always gonna be alright
Love this family union
Lovely

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[dan]

Very nice joint effort. A lot of feeling words expressing a lot of thoughtful reflection. The two of you mesh very well in your sharing of ideas and emotions. Very well done. take care...dan

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome collaboration... I really liked it! I like how I can still see your styles shine through in the words... great work!

[sereenaoutloud]

This is a brilliant collaboration, you both blend so well and compliment each other!
It is really great to see you branch out and grow IM...this is a beautiful write you two...well done :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :) :) :)

[A writer]

There. We have read (I for one have read it all the way) an amazing write from two of the most talented writers on the site :) I have featured this one, in your fan club, with Cool Girl :) Just like you asked. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[A writer]

No problem :)

[A writer]

Oh... And almost forgot. You keep writing, or I'll chop your hands off...lol just kidding about that. But you must keep writing. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

No need to threaten... Lol. I'll try.

[A writer]

Don't try. Just do. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay okay. I'll write :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay okay. I'll write :)

[A writer]

Why the double comments? lol. And yeah! :) :) :) :) :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol. Sorry... lol. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol. Sorry... lol. :)

[A writer]

Okay. You're funny. Lol. Lets leave this at that. :)