Collaboration with Nisreenaa

Okay. :) thank you to Nisreenaa. Her part in this, is beautiful :)

Once again
Engulfed flames
Set free from blame
Mind gone
Reach out far
For a guideline
Star
A burning heart
Why so hard...
Letting go
Being apart
Am I another life
Wasted
Was our love the last
Tasted
It can be
Can't be.
Can't be exchanged,
Caged,
Can't be chained,
Tied to the ground
Till the earth goes around
Must fly,
Without bound,
Silent no sound,
But speaking of love,
Out loud
Sending message
New passage
Released in a water
Healed crowd
Covered in cloaks
White donning range
Clearely content
Thanking all stares found

Author's Note

I hope you like it :)

Reviews

[Joel Armstrong]

Loved this one IM !!
I love the fact that you have your own style.Nisreenas done a good job too.U guys should definitely do not collaborations!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :) don't forget to check out the one on her profile :)

[Joel Armstrong]

Will do..!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay :) thank you :)

[sereenaoutloud]

Do not mean to repeat myself but i am going to
I totally love Your style Infernal Machine you writes are always so Raw and powerful...you bleed on the page
AND
Nisreenaa has a unique style that is short, sweet, flowing and mysterious!
You blend really well together ..i love this tug and pull effect!!
Awesome!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[closed]

kudos IM for really coming out of your shell and making new friends
something amazing has been created here

and it shows that a new beginning is on the horizon for you dear friend


-Dream

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you so much :)

[B]

How gorgeous is this piece
Thanks to your beautiful work
Bravo

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :) you did a wonderful job with your part :) :)

[B]

Thanks ...... a very little part

[Dani The Unreviewed]

It was big enough to help create this :) :) :)

[B]

Well ..... i can see your morning is all shinning
Do not forget your shades
and cool cap
You got all the edge on WC

[Dani The Unreviewed]

More like my afternoon lol. :) thanks :)

[B]

lol
Well Good Afternoon :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

:) :) :) :) :) to you too :)

[B]

Today is the first day of Ramadan
so excited
A month of reflecting
Finding your core and heart again
The world can often take that
So it is a beautiful time of the year

[Dani The Unreviewed]

So true. :) the world is a **** hole sometimes...most of the time...almost every time... But Important to keep being happy :)

[B]

Everyone's world feels that way
That's why mankind invented ice cream lol
And candyread moreEveryone's world feels that way
That's why mankind invented ice cream lol
And candy
and movie theaters
not to mention Cake lol
Completely awesome ...... as you can tell i am hungry already :P

[Dani The Unreviewed]

True :) lol. And thanks to those, the dentists have a lot of work. Lol. :)

[B]

lol
And you are funny
:P

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol. Lets write somethin funny sometime. :)

[B]

I would love that

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yay :) in the meantime... I've got a joke... A police officer stops a car, and says to the driver: "And you call this old rust bucket a car ay?" and he starts laughin. The driver says: "No sir. I don't call this a car...if i did, then i'd need to have a licence..."

[B]

lol
Gooooooooooooooooooood one
:P

I have some really cool stuff to show you

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Can't wait :)

[B]

I got me a good friend over here
Guns and roses cool
I am getting a cap by the way :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lol. I've got a shirt with the whole band on it :)

[B]

so i am getting a shirt too lol
i love led zeppelin too

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yup, me too

[B]

And i love Bon Jovi he is super cool

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You got that right :) also Green day, Night wish, AC/DC, My chemical romance, Lost prophets, Nickelback, Kiss. And a lot more :)

[B]

Green day are awesome
Chemical brothers lol
Waw
We will share tons of musicread moreGreen day are awesome
Chemical brothers lol
Waw
We will share tons of music

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yup :) :) :) Oh...just remembered... Foo fighters, Metallica, Iron maiden, Blonde, Eminem, and tons more that i forgot... lol.

[B]

lol
Music does the trick most of the time
IT liberates

[Dani The Unreviewed]

So true :)

[A writer]

Yup:) this one is trully a great write :) two very very talented writers. Wow:)

[Lyric]

Awesome one guys

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome collab my friend... two great artists and one great poem :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :) :) :)