Another write

In hungary, 1989
5800 people commited suicide,
out of these people 2000 were between age 16 and 35. with this we're at first place in the world......
my boyfriend nearly killed himself a few weeks ago...this write goes out for his well being.

You don't want loved ones to cry,
Because you die.
I know its hard to fly,
Right now we're both on the floor.
Hit rock bottom,
But its time to stand up.

In burnin fire you'll burn if you die,
By your own hands...
And i will cry,
For eternity i wish i die
So you can live,
Its your time to fly.
Please don't cry,
That wont solve this.

I'd give my life,
To see you one more time
Just to kiss you one more time.
Evil they are all,
Who wish you harm,
I wish them hell.

You'll see me again,
Just keep livin, we'll meet again.
No, it aint easy for me either,
Life is just a feather.
Life is dancin on a rope,
Under it is a pit,
Waitin to devour it.
One wrong step,
And we fall into the depths.

Just don't give up,
Don't care...
If i will have to kill,
We'll be together,
Even if its against god's will.

Just as you said,
There is not one moment sad,
When we're together.
And we will be forever.

Just don't die,
The world will cry,
The world i gave you.
The time is right,
But the place is wrong,
There aint nobody strong.

This broken, killed heart,
Shattered, burned...
But still here for you.

Only if you would come,
The world would be calm,
Full with love.
But you're tied,
And i'm tired,
All hope retired.

Its all dark,
I aint no tony stark,
My life is just empty and dark,
Without you, its just a broken heart
I aint rocky balboa to say no pain,
I only want you to gain.
Just stay alive,
I'm on my way,
Even if i have to walk all the way,
I've got no stay,
Without you there is no way.

Just be alright,
Safe in the dark of night,
Happy at the sight of day,
I will come and say hey,
When i'll find the way,
Leadin to your arms,
Two love filled hearts,
Thats what we were,
And we will be forever.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Joel Armstrong]

Its one of the best poems I've read on writers cafe.You have outdone yourself my friend😀.
Its so soulful,the emotion,its raw emotion,and it is such a powerful poem.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you so much :)

[J.A. Marquez]

Beautiful! You really put your heart out there on this one. I'm glad that you are writing about it. You're such a strong person and talented to boot. Keep letting it flow.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you.

[E G TEN]

Hello my friend, this is a wonderful shared write, like a journal/autobiography piece. I'm glad your stepping up
And facing this trials of your life in a mature and proper
Right path,, keep up the good work. I give this write a
101% rating ! Thanks for sharing :-)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you.

[AaronFreitas]

I can feel the hurt and pain IM... I'm sorry to hear he tried to do that. Even when we think there is nothing to live for the truth is there always is and theres ways with time life will get better. I know I have been there... been to some dark places and tried to do the dirty deed. I even wrote about it in a story about when I was younger but there are still many times I haven't shared. I am glad I am here no matter how bad it gets we can change it. Stay strong my friend :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks for readin. And No...there is no way to change this. But right now i'm to much of a coward to kill myself...so no need to worry about me. I really don't see any hope...at all.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

And i really don't see why would i have to keep livin. I see a million to die, and very few to live.

[AaronFreitas]

I know how you feel... it will get better though... believe that it will.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Can't afford to believe in that. Cuz it wont get better. Not until he is safe, and here with me.

[closed]

there's hope in this one
i like that...

you seem to be slowly accepting the situation

but in that acceptance there is always a chance for tomorrow...

until then...

write on^

-Dream

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks for readin. Yeah...not acceptin the situation, but i have sort of realized there is nothin i can do.

[closed]

accepting things can be hard
but keep trying to find new ways to write your way out of this torment IM...

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I'll try...but i'm afraid that there is no way writin out of this. No matter how many poems, and how i'll write them, they wont express what i feel inside.